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2020-08-11 JoinedMexico
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Az1

    Done.

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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Commented

    Town of Guide City? Hmm, is it a town or a city? Probably a city from the context.

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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to shiromirai

    Will do. However, I might start to write a more "generic" novel to gain more experience before returning to this one. It won't have any gender bender though. Once I become better at writing, I will remake this novel while keeping the story mostly the same.

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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to shiromirai

    He will eventually get one, but that will happen much later in the future.

    Not having a body feels strange, but borrowing someone else's is even more so. Even then, until I get one for myself, I still have to.
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Endless_Clouds

    Well, this novel is really not for everyone. If it wasn't for those few people who still enjoy it, I would have already started writing another one of my ideas. I was going to give him Soul Reaper much later but decided to give it to him earlier as his future self would be too strong to even need it.

    Ch 27 Like a King (This entire chapter will be going to the trash bin)
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    I still have to sign a few things and wait until it gets approved so it might take a while. Also, Premium only means that new chapters will be locked and you will have to use Fast Passes (free, you get two per day) or Coins (real money) to unlock them.

    Ch 26 Bear (Slightly changed but still needs improvements)
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    Done.

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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    As for statistics, this is not a Game World. Things like HP bars and numerical stats don't exist. (I was just too lazy to add them though ... Plus, the skill list of the main character will become longer in the future ...)

    ≪Ancient Mithril Longsword [Sealed] (???). Extremely sharp longsword made from the highest quality mithril by the Legendary Dwarf Blacksmith, Blackburn. It is predestined to fall into the hands of a pure maiden and will unleash its power at a time of great peril to save her.≫
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
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    Even if it doesn't make sense or makes you think the main character is too OP, I am just planting some plot seeds ...

    ≪Ancient Mithril Longsword [Sealed] (???). Extremely sharp longsword made from the highest quality mithril by the Legendary Dwarf Blacksmith, Blackburn. It is predestined to fall into the hands of a pure maiden and will unleash its power at a time of great peril to save her.≫
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to

    Oh, trust me! There are MANY hidden details about it. I didn't mention when and where it was made. Usually, craftsmen leave their name or sign on their best works. Appraisal analyzes the essence of an object ...Also, this sword isn't so simple ... As for how the 'System' works, it will probably be explained later. Hope all of this makes sense to you. Plus, once I improve these chapters, I will add some more explanations like these.

    ≪Ancient Mithril Longsword [Sealed] (???). Extremely sharp longsword made from the highest quality mithril by the Legendary Dwarf Blacksmith, Blackburn. It is predestined to fall into the hands of a pure maiden and will unleash its power at a time of great peril to save her.≫
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    Thanks for the comment, my dear Reader-kun. (Is my reply good enough? XD)

    Ch 21 Inner World
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    Also, you once told me that no one called the protagonist by his name. There is a reason for that. I am trying to immerse the reader in my novel, so his current name is not really important, but don't worry. He will have a proper name one day.

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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
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    It will be op, but maybe not that much. He still many abilities to awaken, after all.

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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    Wow ... that is a lot of words, man. But I am pretty sure that guy is either an author with a lot of experience or that writing is his main job.

    Ch 19 Existence
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    What did he do? If it's about his word count, I am trying to write 2k+ words per chapter. But I think your comment is incomplete as you didn't specify what he did.

    Ch 19 Existence
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    If I suddenly changed improved the chapter 'Trapped' and changed its title to 'Trapped (Improved version)' temporarily, would you read it again? I want to make it more interesting in the future, once I finish the first volume.

    Ch 19 Existence
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    Don't worry, I won't ask any of you for any review before I write at least 50 chapters. Nothing much has happened just yet, so, if you gave me one right now, it would be lacking.

    Ch 19 Existence
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    I will ignore your last words because they are similar to "I can already see the ending!" B) and you might not be wrong :v

    "I" wish to be by Master's side ...
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    I am just trying to give her some backstory. If I don't, she will become a vague character and a trifling member of the harem.

    Ch 18 Truth
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  • DepravedSeeker
    DepravedSeeker3yr
    Replied to Inferno873

    Excellent! Btw, my brother who is a medic said souls are never mentioned in the process of pregnancy, but the psyche is. The difference? Psyche is vaguer as it may refer to the soul, mind, or spirit. And yeah, what you watched the Hero of the Shield? The main character also has "influence" like Usagi-kun.

    Ch 18 Truth
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