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pretty sure it's ai. got to chapter 7 feels very dragged out.

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love the story so far. hope you contine to write it

pretty good rolls

Not gonna lie if the leaf did that and I was this guy I would think that the kids are bait and would not attack

People be stupid jump into the water and swim away, definitly had enough time to get way to a safer location

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+1

Not really a Harry Potter fanfic. First 10 chapters a waste of time he goes for Harry Potter world to another world right after. I do not recommend