Is there any way to dislike this shit? Как-нибудь можно поставить дизлайк этому говну?

Произведение мне нравится. Приятно наблюдать как герой постепенно растет в характере, хотя и жаль Сюри. Но все же было бы забавно если бы он пошел в подземный мир бить морды богам смерти, чтобы вернуть душу Сюри.

The plot is gaining momentum and it’s cool, Shuri’s soul most likely ended up in the afterlife of Shintoism. In fact, Igor can go there and, like Goku, punch the faces of the gods.

Author, bro. You can just make a separate chapter in which there will be a description of the technicians, and not mess with the chapter with this information. Take him out into the world, let him run around and fight his strong opponents. With Chinese cultivators, asami, spirits with ancient mummies, magicians, vampires let him beat. Fairies will meet, different monsters of ancient Greece. There are plenty of options, so the story will be more interesting.

Author, bro. You can just make a separate chapter in which there will be a description of the technicians, and not mess with the chapter with this information. Take him out into the world, let him run around and fight his strong opponents. With Chinese cultivators, asami, spirits with ancient mummies, magicians, vampires let him beat. Fairies will meet, different monsters of ancient Greece. There are plenty of options, so the story will be more interesting.

China

Star wars

And the next thing he'll say is, "I'm your father." Best Chinese cliché ever.

So the question of losing his humanity is a little bit wrong, but rather he’s just become like Steve Rogers, a man who has greatly improved his abilities.

I want to remind the author and everyone else that people in real life can also learn and use echolocation. There are studies conducted in 2018 and 2019 that proved this, there is a man named Daniel Kisha who is blind from birth and owns echolocation and even teaches others. There are many such people. Who wants to find the details but I suggest you watch the TED talk with Daniel Kisha: How I use echolocation to navigate the world.

Soe Fong

For God's sake. Why are you writing this хуйню? What stepbrother? I already mailed you the nomination for worst paper of the year. Чел ты полный идиот, такой кринж писать это талант не иначе. Херово быть тобой, идиот.

Jesus, man, are you seriously writing something like that? Even for the finite logic of the world of Dxd, what you wrote looks like the delusions of a schoolboy. Although maybe you really are in school. People who rate it more than 2-3 stars clearly something wrong with the head.

This piece was already below average, so now after chapter 28 it has reached the status of natural turd. Congratulations to the author, you’ve outdone yourself. God rest your work, bro. You ruined it. All in all, good luck with your creative endeavors.

По началу очень нравилось, но потом пошли нелогичные сюжетные дыры которые ты даже не потрудился прикрыть. Но имеющий возможность достич очень большой силы продается как шлюха летучим мышам за силу которую сам может достич. Браво. Родилось ещё одно клише, хуйня крч, дропаю. _____________________________________ At first I really liked it, but then there were illogical plot holes that you didn’t even bother to cover up. But someone who has the ability to achieve very great strength is sold like a whore to bats for the strength that he himself can achieve. Another cliché was born, crap, I drop.

Ну и херня, эти реинкарнации в летучих мышей уже так достали что блевать тянет. Поздравляю чел, ты создал ещё одно гребаное клише. Ху#ня крч.

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