Bietarnu

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New author trying my luck and seeing if people will actually like my stories! :D

2020-08-08 JoinedUnited States

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Bietarnu14 days ago
Replied to Insane_Fantasy
i know i don't HAVE too lol but its something I've wanted to do for a long time now. Plus it'll be cool to see my creations given form
I sigh happily as I look upon my third and final room! I finally did it and it didn't take that long, only feels like maybe a month has passed! But I made a good space I think. I connected my core room to the last room by a tiny tunnel. It's a little cheeky but nobody said I couldn't so I made a tunnel that was the size of maybe a pea and led it into the first room that was a huge rectangle. During the clearing I actually found a weird root and I ate the entire thing! It was so tasty, it was like a mix of butter fried potato's and I was sad when it disappeared but after I finished I got a notice like the pixie bones that it was called a pulpfruit and is some kind of underground veggie. After making the massive room I made a side room next to it that was a circle that I thought could be a good place for a bigger monster for the people to fight and finally a small entry room that I'll just leave empty as a kind of entrance. I think I did pretty good and obviously it counted cus as I finally ate the last corner of the tiny entranceway I got a new prompt from the system.
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnu14 days ago
Replied to Insane_Fantasy
im actually working with a local artist to have my cover work done and if its up to my standards i plan to put any money i earn from this and my patreon into creating illustrations of the dungeon floors, mobs, and characters.
I sigh happily as I look upon my third and final room! I finally did it and it didn't take that long, only feels like maybe a month has passed! But I made a good space I think. I connected my core room to the last room by a tiny tunnel. It's a little cheeky but nobody said I couldn't so I made a tunnel that was the size of maybe a pea and led it into the first room that was a huge rectangle. During the clearing I actually found a weird root and I ate the entire thing! It was so tasty, it was like a mix of butter fried potato's and I was sad when it disappeared but after I finished I got a notice like the pixie bones that it was called a pulpfruit and is some kind of underground veggie. After making the massive room I made a side room next to it that was a circle that I thought could be a good place for a bigger monster for the people to fight and finally a small entry room that I'll just leave empty as a kind of entrance. I think I did pretty good and obviously it counted cus as I finally ate the last corner of the tiny entranceway I got a new prompt from the system.
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnu22 days ago
Replied to Rowenoak84
but...but...I have the diabetes.....XD
Ch 156 Toxins and Traps
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnua month ago
Replied to Questi0nMa7k
thats what i was going for lol southern style bandits
"Tellin' ya that this here is one of thems dungeons that the venturers have. If we can beat it we may get some loots and be able to fight them betters plus look its small and only has one beastie, we got this." says a burly bandit that I assume is the leader considering all his gear seems in better shape and stronger than the rest.
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnua month ago
Replied to Rowenoak84
now that the issues with webnovel have been resolved I'm going to try and get back onto a writing schedule. I plan to try and push out one to three chapters a week depending on my schedule since I now work second and third shift randomly. If your looking for more of my work though I moved my other novel Time of the Monster King over to royal road and it can be read for free.
Ch 156 Toxins and Traps
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnu2 months ago
Replied to anthony_eppley
I will actually begin writing here within the next few days. I had to take a hiatus due to some bugs with webnovel itself as well as multiple health issues but luckily everything has finally been resolved and I know exactly where this arc is going along with the next piece of Kyle's story
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnu5 months ago
Replied to Derek_Beane
I'm on hiatus sadly because of webnovels contract policies. I can't in good conscience charge people for chapters when i'm not recieving any of the revenue that was helping me maintain a writing schedule. I should be starting up again though after the new year due to the policy changes that will let me fix the issues. Till then i'm back to 3 jobs and 90 hour work weeks lol
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnua year ago
Replied to Uchiwa_Madara
havent had to deal with that bug yet just the random balls ghosting through pals and unable to toggle off attacks lol loving it so far though
Ch 155 Hunters Collide
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnua year ago
Replied to Noah_Jacques_7965
I'm actually in contact with a couple artists that are interested in coming up with floor designs, pictures of what the characters and monsters look like, and landscapes of the area's in the dungeon and world. It sadly takes time and I refuse to let someone put in that much work for free so its taking awhile to figure it out.
[Blueprint for Satyr Zombie Received] [Loot received-Iron hatchet, Leather Armor Set, Quiver of Swiftness, Magical Tattoo Tome: Flame Burst]
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu
Bietarnua year ago
Replied to SunMetal
Squishy is gonna be fun when they finally appear lol.....your not quite there but not quite wrong either :D
"They're trying sir, looks like the trouble starters are retreating towards the dungeon, with about two thirds of the slaves that are actually intelligent. The feral's are helping us surprisingly by taking out anything that gets close so we've just been leaving them be until we can contain them again. As for the corrupt dungeon bosses, the deathknight and troll were seen making their way towards the dungeon as well, the minotaur is on the south end now and the lich as you know is no longer a threat. That damn creature though is still loose and eating everything it can. Last seen in the center of the camping area, devouring a centaur we captured a few weeks ago. Ate him...hooves and all." Anissa says with a shiver as she recalls the gelatinous red creature with flailing tentacles slowly pushing the horse creature into its body, the still living man screaming in agony as his body dissolved while still breathing.
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
Fantasy · Bietarnu

Awakened As A Dungeon Core?

What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe. Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but always wanted to try so any feedback helps! Also below is my patreon! Most things to influence my novel are free but by subscribing to it you help me afford more time to write instead of working two jobs as well as to commission artists to turn my monsters and manic dream creatures into reality! https://patreon.com/user?u=71062598

Bietarnu · Fantasy

4.1

157 Chs

Time of the Monster King

Jayce is a man down on his luck. Jobless, orphaned, and the only way to survive being to stream his miserable attempts at being a gamer, he one day finds himself waking up in a forest. As he awakes he realizes he doesn't know how he got here but will he survive to be strong enough for this new world. This Novel will be getting moved to royal road in the near future under the same name.

Bietarnu · Games

Not enough ratings

61 Chs