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Steven_Spoon2dReplied to Ash_thirumuruCh 3 3. Four Friends- Steven_Spoon10dCommentedCh 216 How the Real Calliope Ended Up There
- Steven_Spoon22dCommentedCh 195 Keeping a Memento of Her Previous Life
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please work on getting the correct name for your characters. it completely stops the flow of the story tring to figure out who you're writing about.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Steven_Spoon1mthReplied to The_Sweet_Sparrow
couldn't agree more.
"I see, you know, last year a young lady in town claimed the Baron had abducted her, beat her and had his way with her body. No one accepted the tale and assumed she had run around and got herself in a bad way. The entire town thought she was lying and shunned her." - Steven_Spoon1mthCommentedThe Day Is Almost Over, Hang In TheredetailOh No, I get stuck with Crazy Name that Stuck me with A crazy Goddess!Anime & Comics · RikuKage
- Steven_Spoon1mthCommentedCh 58 Interrogated
- Steven_Spoon1mthCommentedCh 11 For Dark, For Darker, For Darkest
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I laughed so hard at this. so good.
Sitting at the table, polymorphed into a form he didn't recognize was his very own daughter, Gabbrielle. - Steven_Spoon2mthCommented
I think imprinted is the word you are looking for not impregnated .
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I am so confused. isn't Alena the one with memories of a past life? Aisha was the one that was engaged to Bittu and does not have memories of a past life. help me out here
".....", Aisha stumbled into speechlessness, unsure of how to respond to the question. Silence took over the place as an awkward atmosphere gradually took place. After a while, Elena said with curiosity and a tinge of excitement, "Let's forget about it. Tell me which skill you got?" - Steven_Spoon2mthCommentedCh 136 Chapter 139 - Collapse you with a single shot!_1
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this does not make him a womanizer. there is nothing wrong with finding new love.
A womanizer? - Steven_Spoon2mthCommented
not really liking this character path for Alice. I like te bubbly and playful personality but turning her into moron is not fun.
William then felt that Alice seemed even more out of touch with this era than he was. - Steven_Spoon3mthReplied to xImBlackLegend
or just simply leave.
She took out a pack of tissues, took a deep breath, and readied herself. - Steven_Spoon3mthCommented
no kidding. why does he need to find a gas station that is open? they don't turn off pumps when the close.
However, how could they fill up the gasoline in a situation like this? - Steven_Spoon3mthReplied to Ethernal7
lol. women don't forget.
It seemed that she either forgot the previous topic or she didn't want to discuss it.