Almost got me. Thanks for the save.

Okay, one question. Does he have the Zenkai Boost? Because if he does, then wouldn't this penalty be a reward instead but in a twisted and more masochistic fashion? Just saiyan~.

Zahahahahax! Definitely one of the best Naruto fic I've ever read on this platform! It's a wholesome story completed with action, comedy, drama, and romance. A great choice to read if you don't have anything to do, it will make you feel fulfilled in a sense. Anyway. Great Job Monkey! Zahahahahax

Beats me...

Good job man... Going great so far. Really like how you add fantastical touches in the story as well as how you fit certain events little tidbits together that actually kind of makes sense... Anyway. Don't drop 'cause you're doing a great job.

So~... Should I read it, or not?

Been enjoying the story so far, and the pace that you are going is really to my liking. Fast, but not too fast to the point that it's almost disgusting. Really enjoying how you mix other elements from different animes, just try not to add something that wouldn't fit the world that he's in... Alright? But anyway, don't listen to the rabbles that the other readers are on, just keep at your own pace. Finally, don't you dare nerf him... — DareMeNot

Don't let us down! 😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😀😁😊😁😀😁😊😁😀😁😁😁😀😁😊😁😁😁😊😁😁😁😊😁😁😁😀😁😊😁😀😁😀😁

Fic is very addicting, especially the elements that author includes which really tickles the readers' hunger for more chapters! Great job bro, keep it up! 😁😊😁

That's the spirit! Don't bother with what the dickhead said, author. Just do what you want, I, as well as some people out there who will eventually read this'll appreciate your efforts. Keep it up! 👌👌👌🙂😁

Why doesnt this fix have a ranking yet? It's clearly better than the rest of the marvel fic that I have read in this platform... But yeah, needs quite a bit of editing. But anyway, nice work bro...👌😁😁👌👍

Haven't read it yet, but based on some of the reviews... I'll be honest, I'm having second thoughts... But I'll read it anyway. Heck, it's one of the few Twilight fics currently available here, so I'll bite. But seriously, just take it at your own pace, all authors started from there, writing experimental fics, so you're no different. Just gain experience, then the next time you attempt to write something, it'll come to you normally on what and which you have to consider to make your story more stable. Anyway, just keep on trying~! 😆😆😆😜

That's why it's called fanFICTION in the first place...😑😑😑

Burst, bro. But I think I might have mixed up the two for better balance, but, don't mind the drtails~! 😂😂😂😂

Well, if he did, it would be too boring, no?😆😆😆

No worries you peeps out there, no Harems in here. He'll in a serious relationship with Hilde. I'm not hiding it, 'cause it's already pretty obvious the moment I put him in Lestein. 😊😊😊

Well, this is my own fic, so it wouldn't be right if I myself doesn't support it, right? Anyway! I'll first be amassing twelve chapters again, then after that, I'll publish it! Ciao!!!😆😆😁😆😆

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If you find it boring then don't read... No one's forcing you, stupid...