i really feel like the author isn't staying with the story all the time. I'm still enjoying it though, and as a writer myself, I how he returns to the main story full force.

I want to take over the original plot. too bad it doesn't work that way.

this

this book isn't what it claims to be. it start out well written and fun, then becomes a transmigration book into the world of one piece. I'm sorry disappointed.

so legit this is one piece now?

I'm starting to get scared that this change in the story isn't some dream Occam is having and that this book will never return to it's original ☠️

seriously though. what happened and where is everyone else? the dragon and Atos? his two player friends? did you suddenly just decide you were changing what you were writing? I hope this all comes back together at some point.

how do I subscribe to this novel?

this book is a really good read. I recommend it to those who enjoy a different type of vrmmo main character. I've grown fond of Occam's adventures.

I love where this story is headed

Poor Goldie. I just hope the grade increase to Legendary works out and the power that comes with it is worth the feather loss

I hope more chapters come out soon. I really like where this is headed.

I truly love where this headed and am sure to be a loyal reader. I look forward to having more chapters released soon! Occam is Awesome!!!!

this is by far the best novel I've read on here, that includes the ones I'm writing! well played, you really know your stuff

I like where this story is headed. you've really caught my attention

I mean vampires are overdone so a.new outlook isn't bad yeah?

Leo is awesome. just sayin

harsh but true

I don't care what anybody thinks. I really like reading this novel and seeing where it heads

agreed