Elysiae

are you for real saying that? nah man 😂

So far, it’s decent. It just needs better scene transitions and more detailed descriptions of the surroundings. Other than that, the update schedule has been stable so far. But based on the other fics of yours that I’ve read... I just hope it doesn’t turn into a two-week or one-month wait per chapter like those. Also, your idea is pretty interesting an enemy from Genshin in DanMachi? That’s new. Anyway keep up a good work.

huh just about to reread this fic after 1 or 2 year since i check it but it gone now. 1 of my fav fic create by this author....

otto..

dam it good

this fanfic is really good. I enjoy reading it. I hope you still cantinue translate it until this fanfic finish

the worm girl from fate😔

yesh

wha-

I understand your desire to see the protagonist with instinctive control over her abilities, but please keep in mind that she was just an ordinary human before and had no knowledge of magic. The fact that she was able to use her abilities at all is already quite remarkable, given her lack of experience. Additionally, the protagonist's wish was to be able to use all forms of magic, not to be able to use them all perfectly or instinctively. While it's true that most spirits have instinctive control over their abilities, the protagonist is unique in that she is still learning and growing in her new form. Finally, I appreciate your feedback, but please keep in mind that this is a fanfic and anything can happen in this fictional world. While the protagonist may not have instinctive control over her abilities at the moment, who knows what kind of growth and development she may experience in the future?