I have not stopped it is life has changed for me right now and still trying to find my feet

rip

The story is very well written and the author does a very good job at not making the main charter op and sticking to the story, it is well written with a few mistakes.

great story it is in it's early stages so can't give this book a full review but I say that it is going in the right direction, there are some spelling mistakes but the aurther is getting better, keep up the great work

love it

I think you story is great and I think the book you are writing is going in the right Direction

Love you work hop you can keep it up

love your work man and can't wait for Arc 2

love the chapter

loving the story

love the chapter

don't push your man if are sick just focus on getting better, so that your work and you health don't take a nosedive

love the chapter

thanks for the chapter

love the chapter man. keep up the good work

Do what you need to do man this is a great book and I'm will to weight

his hole body is made out of a living metal. but his body still does have some flesh but it is slowly being replaced by the living metal that is why his transformations have a time limit to them.

sorry I was very tired when I did that and just through out some very rough numbers

thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work mate

thank you for telling me that I have edited the chapter and add that in