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ecogreen42yrCommentedThanks for the chapter.
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I like the story, but I dislike the cliche of the overpowered and multitalented female lead. Physician/neurosurgeon, herbalist ( or knowledgeable about poisonous plants), hacker, etc, and she's still a freshman? It is too far fetched. Im staying for the devel9ment of the romance, but I would rather skip all the op stuff .
Ch 28 Dark History - ecogreen42yrCommented
slithered...
Mona turned around after dealing with them, and the snake that was on the ground slivered up and went around her neck. When turning she looked at those in front of her, and noticed how tired and torn their clothing were. - ecogreen42yrCommented
I like thatđ
"Fex, I want to be your puppet for a little while," Layla said. - ecogreen42yrCommented
typo: isn't
'Wait a second, ins;t there one person?' Layla thought. - ecogreen42yrCommented
especially since...
'Is it because of my reaction from last time, is there really no way to fix this?' She wondered. It was crushing her a little inside to know this. Epically since one person had an advantage over her. The fact that she could be by his side through all of his struggles. That was sure to win her some brownie points. - ecogreen42yrCommented
Ugh, I hope this is not foreshadowing Paul's death. It would be too much heartache, plus he hasn't reunited with his daughter, seems like he could go on living as a vamp as he is getting used to it. It could be cool if he ends up with two daughters after the battle with Bryce is over (one biological and one "adopted" -Kazz-).
"Don't Paul, please listen to meâŚ.if you want to live, don't go investigating those missing people." Kazz said, her face almost shedding tears. - ecogreen42yrCommented
is that the blood infused tea that Cindy used to drink? I thought they could only enjoy alcohol besides blood đ¤
***** - ecogreen42yrCommented
...like this one who was roaming... (agreement this one ---> was )
Many vampires had left the settlement, and some of them had turned into Bloodsuckers like this one who were roaming outside. The one thing they craved was human blood, but since there weren't any humans on the planet itself, they couldn't stray too far away from the settlement. - ecogreen42yrCommented
...castle...
He also had created the Shadow disks, that worked great with his soul weapon shadow overload, and there were still skills he had yet to perfect or find the right time to use, from the tablet he had discovered at the fourteenth casele. - ecogreen42yrCommented
typo: hardening
On top of this, Quinn could use Blood control to the degree where he could perform moves such as the Blood drill, and could combine attacks creating a blood hammer strike and such, but these weren't skills that could level up, and seemed to increase in strength depending on Quinn's blood control level. This was also true for Blood Harding as well. - ecogreen42yrCommented
...yet, before he did, there was...
The next second, all of the weapons disappeared into Quinn's dimensional space. He was the best person to quickly transport them where they were needed. His next stop was to head off to meet up with Helen on one of the Cursed faction planets, yet before he did there was one last thing he wanted to do. - ecogreen42yrCommented
...forging room...
Quinn soon appeared next to Alex. There were around two hundred blood weapons consisting of all types of different weapons, all laid out across the floor on pieces of cloth in his foraging room, each one crafted with care. - ecogreen42yrCommented
Longblade...
"That is good news! I guess now it's time I show you something else." Quinn nodded as he pulled out the sword that had been given to him by Longbalde. He slowly raised the sword up, and started to spin the sword until it was around thirty centimeters of the ground. Everyone was looking carefully at the demonstration. Looking at the floor, they could see it. - ecogreen42yrCommented
... We're your friends...
"Lucy might not have always shown it to you, but there's one I'm certain about, your mother loved you to the bitter end. Whatever the truth may end up being, you don't have to shoulder it yourself. We your friends, will be there for you." - ecogreen42yrCommented
...maybe [if] we had a rematch...
"It took a lot of work to put that mech in that ship, so I hope that your group will treat it with care," Avion said. "Fex, you're polite. Far better than I was when I first started to use that thing, I think maybe we had a rematch, we wouldn't know who the winner would be." - ecogreen42yrCommented
... Colonel Longblade...
They had achieved everything that needed to be accomplished, and now the Cursed faction was to go onboard the ship they had arrived in. Seeing them off personally was Cornel Longbalde, Sergeant Rafer and Sergeant Avion. - ecogreen42yrCommented
...where is / where's ... Typo: cried In Jim's hands? đ¤
"Where the head!" the doctors cired.