I like that he got hurt pretty badly, settles that while he is super overpowered he still isn’t invincible. Obviously his power lets him get stronger but I enjoy where he’s at right now. Strong enough to be by far the strongest, but still not an instant victory when the battles reach a certain body count.

240 isn’t even that big at that height. I mean it isn’t small obviously but I feel like you’d be imagining him bigger than that to more fit the superhuman attributes he has. You can Google images of heights and weights for better reference if you think it’s needed, but when you get to well over 6’ it takes some weight to look big.

Maybe a repeat of the scene when he let Freya see his soul? Where shes ready for a 9/10 and he just blasts what she thought was possible out of possibility? Not really an important scene but something I’d like to see. Generally I’d enjoy this arc if it had lots of moments like that, that aren’t serious or dramatic, just his efforts showing through in the happy moments that he went through so much to get to. Anyways, good chapter.

I think tomorrow would become “..on the morrow” if done properly, so Im pretty sure the language is still off. I cant remember ever reading Morrow as a standalone word.

Did he leave the helmet he took off?

When is the “5 years until I leave” in relation to the 12 year doom timeline? I’m assuming he’s leaving just before the doom, but I dont think the doom was only 5 years away yet. I could be misremembering but a reminder would be nice.

I dont get the end, wasn’t Bonney just left on the island?

+1

I don’t like the skill to control his body size. I feel like it’s gonna be an avenue towards keeping him at a reasonable height, and I’m sick of every one piece fic refusing to have characters at the heights that canon characters reach. Seems like everyone avoids having their mc grow beyond normal human limits.

Please stop giving sacred gears to literally everyone that fits the base requirements of having a sacred gear. It’s like every single person who has human in them and is powerful, must have a sacred gear that coincidentally works perfectly as a peerage member.

I don’t even particularly care about the harem aspect, but its still annoying for you to build up relationships for the future, only to decide otherwise in a time skip. I didn’t really care about them being in the harem, but you already built them up as being with him, so it’s a bit lame to just ignore all that and suddenly change it. Also basing his son off of superman, I would’ve made him love one woman. I don’t know why, but I feel it would fit that he would be one of the devil outliers who dont have harems.

Didn’t Dothraki men always have a name ending with o? Drogo, Rhaego, Qotho, Cohollo, Haggo, Mago, Jhaqo, Pono…

When will sera become super-devil? Seems like all she needs is a good fight from what we’ve seen, so why dont they just fight with the goal of him pushing her past her limits? Also, I would prefer if you gave the characters slightly reasonable Limitations, it would be a bit boring if everyone was OP. I don’t Mind some more powerful characters, but if everyone was a Super-devil, it loses interest.

Just gonna ignore the interactions here. Always believed the more realistic angle of Lyanna wanting away from robert, and rhaegar telling her all she wanted to hear to fulfill his prophecy. I find it far more likely than mutual love magically appearing between a young teen and an adult prince whos married and has kids. (Adding on the fact that rhaegar was pretty obsessed with prophecy)

Youd have to take part in the mcu, but with your power set it would only make sense to appear fairly far into the movies. Otherwise its just gonna be op magic vs the mcu’s weak starting villains.

Rhaelle is such an underappretiated character/pairing imo.

Just a what? A foot? The mountain is pretty close to 8 feet tall.

Maybe i’ll read this later, but right now this much writing without spacing will give me a headache.

How many chapters before its new stuff? Interested in arc, but unsure what chapter I should wait for before i start caring