Kandielord
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Kandielord1hCommentedi just keep thinking about how the past few years had so little Ravensteins, due to most dieing at camp, and this new first years are the new monster generation.
The Ravensteins, regardless of if he/she was part of the main family or not became feared in the academy with most of the students stirring clear of them like the plague.- Kandielord1mthReplied to TitanX_1234
pretty sure thats his last name no?
Mason, his voice dripping with superiority, added, "Don't ever forget your place, Natusalune. We're always watching." - Kandielord1mthCommented
in a clearing. ah yes that wall.
Then, the other man, Mason, lunged at me from behind, attempting to catch me off guard. With a quick spin, I deflected his attack, redirecting his momentum into the wall with a loud thud. - Kandielord2mthCommented
gasp! well im truly shocked, could have done this earlier. instead of repeting basics your filler, which would have been enjoyable, should have been a description of each room. not the same door test, walks till he can't, meditates, restate that 12 times and wastes chapter space and the readers will. when it would have been more engaging for the reader to read how the door tested, room description, then "as before atticus pushed as deep as he could without losing control. once satisfied, he began his meditative training of X element for X time before exiting to head for X element room." then explain door test, room description, then " he continued his traing as before in previous rooms, though not as deep since hes control of X element is weaker, it still only being level one after all." x time spent, next room. we would love to read about the blinding light room, how the darkness room reminded him of his sparring buddy, but as he pushed through it became disorienting and an endless void. so on. would have fill up the same amount of chapters but way less maddening and boring. the ice room so cold it rivialed the burning feeling of the fire room. that would have been good as well.
Atticus entered the room after easily passing the test, and after about 5 minutes, he came out of the room and headed to the next, light. - Kandielord2mthCommented
oh 30 mins not an hour, that's a twist. I'm guessing lightning next, though ice or something else be a better choice, theyre lower levels so hed get better gains, since theyre his weakest. honestly the really smart thing would have spent the whole time on a weaker element after spe ding an hour in in fire, water, air, and erarth. this let him understand how the rooms work better and then allow more time to strengthen his other elements. or just spend 4 hours in space to probaly unlock it or come close. he has this class once a week at least so unlocking and leveling the rare elements would be a better use of his time. butttttttttt it will be, lightning trys to zap him he controls it, the room is like a raging storm with wild bolts of lighting all around, he takes control and pushes in till he cant stand it then meditates till his time is up. calling it now.
Atticus remained in this state for about 30 minutes before deciding to stop. He immediately controlled the earth and started heading towards the exit at a fast speed. - Kandielord2mthCommented
bec ause hes in the earth room?
Swiftly choosing this spot to train, Atticus closed his eyes and entered a deep state of meditation, forgetting all his elements except earth. - Kandielord2mthCommented
like the water and air rooms pressure. crazy he keeps picking spots that are just intense enough that he struggles to make the most out of his training. its like we have established that as a character trait, or keep repeating it. maybe both.
His form and the earth enveloping him felt so heavy that there was only a slight nudge needed to have his form crushed into mush. - Kandielord2mthCommented
who would have guessed.
Just like all the other times, Atticus eventually reached a point where he could not proceed any further. - Kandielord2mthCommented
like he has in all the past rooms, almost like this is a training room for that purpose in a hall of similar rooms! in a class specifically made to do this, in an academy that tailor made your classes to fit your abilities! gasp!
Just by being here and without even meditating, he could subtly feel his proficiency with the earth element increasing. - Kandielord2mthCommented
gasp the point of all the rooms restated for filler.
Atticus could sense an intense abundance of the earth element coming from every direction. - Kandielord2mthCommented
and yet the same thing with air and water, so we do have an idea. shocker. I really enjoy the story part, however, getting really sick of the fluff filler to make chapters longer. again the actual story part great. but every time you drag out a basic thing 5 ways to sunday i want to put a bullet in my head. its honestly getting worse as each chapter comes out. Your writing was good, but the backwards talk to restate something constantly pulls us out of the story. this isnt dragon ball my guy.
It was hard to explain, as though gravity intensified many folds on just his figure. Every movement required deliberate effort to execute, and even the earth he took control over became harder and harder to manipulate. - Kandielord2mthCommented
again we know. four chapters of the same thing.
Atticus kept controlling the earth, going deeper and deeper into the space. With each passing moment, he could feel a certain type of heaviness enveloping his form. - Kandielord2mthCommented
so stop wasting word count, we all know as well.
He had already come to understand that all the elemental rooms featured the same workings: the deeper he went, the more intense the element became. - Kandielord2mthCommented
oh the teacher is from that one clan. Seraphins clan. thats what i bet
From the name of the course, it was plenty obvious that the class was all about combat. Why the hell would they need earplugs? And why were they making it so flashy!? - Kandielord3mthCommented
ohhh okay i was thinking eric.
Back in the Raven camp, apart from Nate, Eric, Aria, and Lucas, Elijah had always been next in line as the strongest. He stood at a height of 5ft9, and although not as bulky as Nate, he still put on a few. - Kandielord3mthCommented
that he was darkness and daggers. he was the one that nate fought, right? he was third ranked.
'Hmm, he uses the lightning element and a staff, right?' Atticus recalled Elijah's element and weapon of choice. - Kandielord3mthCommented
Ladies and gentleman skinny and scoutI'll tell you a tale I know nothing aboutThe admission is free so pay at the doorNow pull out a chair and sit on the floorOn one bright day in the middle of the nightTwo dead boys got up to fightBack to back they faced each otherDrew their swords and shot each otherThe blind man came to see fair playThe mute man came to shout hoorayThe deaf policeman heard the noiseAnd came to stop those two dead boysHe lived on the corner in the middle of the blockIn a two story house on a vacant lotA man with no legs came walking byAnd kicked the lawman in his thighHe crashed through a wall without making a soundInto a dry creek bed and suddenly drownedA long black hearse came to cart him awayBut he ran for his life and is still gone todayI watched from the corner of the tableThe only eyewitness to facts of my fableIf you doubt my lies are trueJust ask the blind man, he saw it too
With their weapons drawn, each of the youths ascended the hill at a rapid pace, reaching the top in under a minute. As soon as they got to the top, they came to an abrupt stop. - Kandielord3mthReplied to Walk_fora_coldeath
sarcasm
The two-meter tall staff was an elementary level staff of Element of Water which was the element of Maya. It had a small blue gem at the top to help new mages channel their elements. - Kandielord3mthReplied to aricre
hes saying the right stuff, just wrong reasons and time.
Once he had seen what Marcus was capable of, Cassius had changed his tune, but no one believed that he was completely reformed and had changed his way of thinking. It was obvious that he just wanted to beat The Celestial Seven-head Serpent in order to secure himself a spot in the special dungeon. - Kandielord3mthCommented
i literally was craving mexican and had that for dinner, and im eating the left overs now 🤣🤣
Using his skills and high stats he easily did the work of a few hundred normal people and after several hours of work had enough tamales, empanadas, tostadas, queso, guacamole, chile verde, arroz rojo, pozole, and many other dishes that could feed at least eighty people.