Good detail, over all a nice grounding!

This story needs to be spaced out so it can last longer. It has a good foundation that can be built into an empire if conducted right. I love the character structure. I like the details. But there could be more! Don't stop writing, keep going. Only practice makes perfect!!! Good job Wes!

There is going to be more, as the Author and a reader, I got trapped in this and in my other book; Loving the Devil if you like this, read the other one. Exciting. Loyalty. Love. Adventure. All awaits in both stories.

Will do!