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I like the protagonist and his relationship with Kenjaku. It's funny. I hope Kenjaku wins in this world. I liked the Zenin clan's OCs, I hope Kashimo gets a romantic partner.

By the gods, what I just read is complete trash. To give you an idea, the dialogues don't even complete a single line. For example ("Wow, what a beautiful day" woman B, "It's a good afternoon" MC, "I want to eat" woman C.) I'm exaggerating a little, but the dialogues are exactly like that, and I'm talking about chapters 600 and earlier. I read this sh!t and with every line I wanted to throw myself off a building.

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Pure garbage, none of the characters have soul or charisma, it feels like I'm reading a summary trying to be a story, I couldn't care about any of the characters. RATE 1.5/10

I'd say the first few chapters are pretty emotionless, or "boring" if you want to be a bit cruel, but if you can get past that, there really is a hidden gem here. OBS I wouldn't call it a diamond, I'd say a pretty big ruby. Note 8.6/10

Chapter I'm currently reading: 131 The story so far is very good, although nothing major has happened in terms of the danger for the characters. Honestly, I expected a lot of clichés that GL romances would have. But surprisingly, it tries to avoid them, which is a big plus point of this work. Of course, there are still many clichés, but what work doesn't? Positive points: The MC isn't dense like obsidian (up until this point [chapter 131] they're together like glue, only without the word "dating"). The combat in the story is very good, which is surprising for a GL romance (sorry for the bias), and without the annoying love triangle. Negative points: The world isn't very well explained. The author said that chapter 89 could be skipped, a mistake. The chapter is clearly a foreshadowing of the future, and the author simply says you don't need to read it, like, seriously? And speaking of foreshadowing, they're quite obvious (I'll come back here if I'm wrong). Currently, that's all I have so far about this work. 8,7/10

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I don't need to tell you why this work is bad, I don't need to describe its flaws, and I won't even tell you why you shouldn't read it. Just know that I am the warning sign, the traffic sign, and that I am God's Sign.