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So what really is the point of these plot developments? I mean this story isn't over... So couldn't you have started the story after this chapter. idk this is pretty bold to have your main character die twice right at the beginning.

kinda dislike male characters with outlandishly long hair. I'll stick around though. This is like the cultural hairstyle asian folks would use in the past or whatever.

kinda dumb tbh

it's obviously still a misleading title to a novel. 32 chapters in and when you say my girlfriend is an ice dragon you expect some romance between the two. but no it's essentially a dude with a bit of a tragic past joining an academy with his sister to protect her. He's got hidden powers and is trying to hide them from society. To be fair the female lead is indeed an ice dragon. and is introduced a bit. They fought and now he's letting her recover. she's helping him figure out all the crap going on with other worlds and monsters and portals.

I'll be honest this chapter is pretty useless. this character basically never existed in this story. a chapter's worth of one character. existed and scrapped all in one go. You don't really need to show mc prove himself like this. and you even made it clear that this village was very "tight knit" or whatever. uncharacteristic for this type of character to exist anyway. I at least respect how mc proves himself somewhat, and I like the development of the wolf going in for the kill when his master almost dies.

the saying is Giddy up btw but nice try 👍

Furry arc here we come 🤪

Fair point, I kind of like the idea of him being the master of shadows though. I'm excited to see how this develops further either way

Yeah the writing and story telling here is so good. Thank you for all your hard work Author! I am a little bummed that the story is leading on towards his aspect less being "shadow god" and more being "weaver" after that incident with the ichor, but I am really enjoying the story and this ark particularly because you introduced a character a while back and now we know he really is important and isn't just some waste of text haha. I am loving this novel so far keep it up~

And this is exactly one of those moments that are perfect for perspective changes. Finally time to see how Neph is doing