ReiAsteria

The grammar, story-telling, and flow of the story are almost impeccable. Props to that, author! Some bits were awkwardly described here and there in the first chapters. Personally, the main characters' romantic development was a bit fast. Then again, this is a fast-paced story xD. Reading more, the writing does get better and better, the plot becomes more solid, and the interaction between the leading characters becomes more engaging. Very noice!

Okay, first of all, I am aware that this particular story is "fast-paced", however, the lack of descriptions and explanations about the story's events prevents the reader to be fully engrossed with the book. I will advise the author to study the "show, don't tell" technique if he plans to rewrite the story. Focusing on its positive aspects, the system seems to be interesting and the plot, although it can be a bit generic at times, seems to be planned nicely. I'm looking forward to the author's rewrite of this story and possibly be able to improve this review to a 5-star one ^^ Keep it up!

That he is

Surely didn't let Kristen rest in peace tho xD

Mercurius and Mercurian is derived from the name, Mercury, the Roman God of Trade and Commerce ^^

Thank you, raych!

Heya! Thanks! I try to give readers as much stuff to imagine. :3

I like how author wrote the mc, more space for developments :>. The story itself moves at a comfortable pace; not too slow, not too fast. I like how the characters interact with each other, Kali and Lucas as a duo seemed nice and comical. Minor nitpicks, some description regarding the setting was a bit awkward to me, but it isn't that much of a problem. I'll be looking forward to this book and Lucas' character development. Keep it going, author! ^^