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Wow! I found this book like 3 days ago and so happy I found it when Abi and Alex story already done because I couldn't stop reading!!!! THANK YOU Author for sharing your wonderful creativity and imagination in writing this story! My favorite so far in Webnovel!!! Will definitely go leave you a great review. I did not comment throughout since sounded like this portion has been written for several months.....but....glad you were safe from typhoon, glad you are feeling better, I am crying you got silver instead of gold award as well because this story was GOLD! Not sure I covered it all, but I did read all the author's notes. Again, thank you and really look forward to Ezekiel's story in the future! Now off to continue with Kai and Kelly.... XO Cheri
I saw author's question at end of chapter. I am from America. I do think editing helped for this chapter overall, but I was able to read and understand what you meant before even if not exactly the english I am used to... for example, this statement here I would have used "either" in place of "too" so...may not be exact english language "rules" but still understandable. This is a very enjoyable story! Did this feedback help? I do not want to appear rude at all. Just trying to be helpful. So, if you have to pay someone to edit, I would still enjoy your story and you would not have to pay for editing. If you do nit pay for editing, then yes, does help some....
assuming this is a typo and it is actually Princess Avery?
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By far my Favorite couple in this series. This author is fabulous with orignality and ideas. Always keeps you guessing! Definitely read the series in order....makes more sense: Valerian Empire, Heidi and the Lord, then this Bambi and the Duke...Young Mater Damien's Pet follows this. Still reading YMDP so haven't started Belle Adam's Butler.....but they cameo in YMDP... Other books from this author also really good stories and creative!