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Kazzen!!!!!! You're doing so good! Also, yes, I'm sure it is very hard to write as much as you do and have a full time job! Don't get burnt out though! Writing is a passion, and should never be forced! Thank you for the chapters! The role reversal is very good! I would love to see if Alex regains his memories of Abi and his soul by her playing their song and singing to him again. Music lives in the soul..... I know cheezy, but it would be great none the less.
This novel is very good, but there are a TON of grammar errors, sometimes I have to reread somethings twice to try to understand what is being said. The background stories are good, the characters are awesome and mingle and clash naturally. I also love the fact that its going through with each brother and their points of view and their stories of meeting their mate. Torak is great and Raine complents his WONDERFULLY. However, its a little weird with how Kace meets his mate. thats as far as I've gotten so far.
Yet another obstacle. Dear Author, next thing you should have make Abi do it have to start all over again, just like the very beginning when she met Alex in the garage..... NOT. Seriously, the next plot twist could be that he plays hard to get, act like he doesnt know her. Only for her safety until he can eliminate the rest of the enemies and vampires. Abi leaves to go home, feeling heart broken and defeated. Time skip 3 months later. Abi finally tries to move on. Actually her childhood friend confesses his love, she gives in and are about to be married. BOOM. Alex waltzes in and objects at the shot gun wedding when the preacher says "speak now or forever hold your peace" . As Alex walks towards Abi he is throws incense sticks all over that will have everyone regain their memory and filter in that Alex had to leave abruptly to his come country for 6 months and left Abi behind so she could heal and finish things up. WAIT, another plot twist! Abi refuses to go to him and plays hard to get. A series of cat and mouse play out. Alex believes he has failed and tries to leave on his private jet. As the jet is getting ready to take off all of a sudden Abi runs out onto the runway and almost is obliterated by the jet, Alex tears off the door and saves her life. Fill in several voids and add more details. THEN Alex announces to her family that she is the new queen of Country V. More problems arise...... I mean the next plot twist is that she finds out she is pregnant. can easily drag out this summary into about 90 chapters, or more, depending on leace of details and smaller twists throughout. I mean 20 chapters could be just about a troublesome pregnancy after the 90+ leading up to the pregnancy. Another plot twist, time of delivery, there more than one and they can't be delivered normally due to being a vampire.