MettaLord
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MettaLord1mthPostedThe story is good, it's what you would expect when reading a wushu or wuxia with a side Reincarnation/Isekai mixed into it. Although I enjoy the plot, some people who aren't familiar with the wushu or wuxia genre may be turned off by the morality of the characters at times or how things can get a bit cliché. The world background is... your standard modern world with a dash of martial arts. The story could use a bit more work with how rigid dialogs can be when read but other than that, the story is pretty good if you want a quick read to pass the time, if you have read the genre before then you would know what to expect.I would rate it 8.5/10.
- MettaLord1mthReplied to Verhygo
Very human indeed, he's only human after all~ 🤣
Dawn laughed sheepishly from the inside and opened the door to peek out. He found Saffron looking at him with a gaze brimming with sarcasm. Dawn extended his hand to take the paper bag as he said, "You are so thoughtful, Saffie. Thank you." - MettaLord1mthReplied to Verhygo
Wushu!
Dawn was surprised, and then he chuckled at her remark. He asked, "When can I leave this monotonous place?" - MettaLord1mthCommented
lol
Saffron woke from her daze and said, "I am looking at you. What are you trying to do by acting like a monk? I never knew you were so pretentious." - MettaLord1mthCommented
That sounds cool
It was the first level of the body-tempering realm in cultivation. The early stage would require Dawn to temper his skin, the medium stage would require him to temper his muscles and bones, and the late stage would be when he tempers his organs with spiritual energy. - MettaLord1mthCommented
Wouldn't not changing his decision means he is unreasonable 😅
He was not unreasonable, but he never changed his decisions. At this moment, even when he had nothing left, he was sure he would not give in and rise to the peak of this world. The Heavenly Prince's never-back-down mindset came from the depths of his soul. - MettaLord1mthReplied to Verhygo
welcome to wushu verhygo... welcome to wushu...
The remnant of his predecessor's consciousness was getting agitated as Dawn looked into the memories. He sighed and thought, 'Do not worry. You were a man who followed the path of virtue. The heavenly abode of souls is where you should rest. Your body is now my body. Your karma is now my karma, and so is your life. I will make all of them pay for what they did to you.' - MettaLord10mthReplied to NovaEre
What I mean is that I can't feel hurt or sorry for the characters, everything happened to quickly before I even managed to care about the characters
Steve turned to look through the windshield, but it was already too late. The oncoming vehicle had already collided with the front end of their car. The strong impact sounded akin to an explosion. - MettaLord11mthCommentedIn the last moments, Steve tried to turn the car, but the sudden shift of weight and force of the collision made the vehicle flip over and skid on the asphalt before it stopped.
- MettaLord11mthCommented
well that turn from 0 to a 100 real quick. But I can't feel any remorse...
Steve turned to look through the windshield, but it was already too late. The oncoming vehicle had already collided with the front end of their car. The strong impact sounded akin to an explosion. - MettaLord1yrReplied to Madness_IncarnateCh 59 notice: thinking of remaking the story
- MettaLord1yrPosted
I will give my true honest opinion on this. Your writing... puts a fricking Manhwa novel "Never Die Extra" to shame. Before the viewers complain'ere, I said it was the writing quality(sentences, paragraphs, grammar, etc etc). Seeing that you've recently started with 7 chapters I expect fast updates and quality chapters. The world background, doesn't really need to be explained really, is the typical world like most Cultivator stories go. The only difference I see this time is there's some focus pointed at a mystical toilet infinite Exp... god knows how many people died in there.
- MettaLord1yrCommented
Wait, ling tao is Waluigi!?
He looked in the mirror, only to see the same old face. Short messy hair, a long nose, and dead eyes with the dark circles. - MettaLord1yrCommented
can it be... a cockroach?
"GRARRRRR!!!" A demonic creature was dominating the bathroom; its gooey skin spread all over the tiles of the floor. As the door opened, a thousand eyes in its dark gooey skin shifted in the direction of Ling Tao. - MettaLord1yrCommented"Just who is he?" The kids began to mutter. "In private? Does it mean…"
- MettaLord1yrCommented"Qiqi…" Gasps went through the crowd when she was addressed by her first name. "I don't really see anyone's aura in this school who claimed to be cultivators except yours. Please, if you can see my aura… Tell me. Tell me if I'm a cultivator or not."
- MettaLord1yrCommented
Famous last words for what's coming for him... I think?
'She knows who I am? Could it be… that she already knows I am a cultivator?' Ling began to get excited. - MettaLord1yrCommented
So these S-Rank ghosts are... haunting this man's toilet? how many people died in that toilet for it to be a ghost nest
Ever since he was a kid, at least once a week, a spirit who attempts to kill him comes out of his bathroom. And every time that spirit was spawned, Ling just managed to exorcise those evil ghosts with a simple blow. (A mere 4th grader who managed to kill off an S-Rank spirit with a simple blow.) - MettaLord1yrReplied to Geee
Honestly, I was new and didn't know lol
(AN: Insert pic of head being executed, go to wattpad to see it... its bad though( ;∀;) ) - MettaLord1yrReplied to GeeeCh 57 Chapter 21, The Offer