LocoWriter911
Sup đ I'm a novice writer who has read tons of stories and well I wanted to give it a try. I'm also a college student so yeah my stories have been kinda slow. I just wanna say thanks for reading
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LocoWriter9111yrCommentedHer looks could not be called stunning, but her countenance was delicate and small enough, with a goose-egg face, straight bridge of the nose, small red mouth, and green hair naturally falling over her shoulders, just like the image of the young sister next door in his mind.- LocoWriter9112yrPosted
What you have so far sounds interesting but it's going to be hard to give power stones to have you continue if the power stone option is not there. The chapters are also shorter than other stories that I've read before but so far it's been entertaining. An advice from me would be to update once or twice, otherwise people going to think that you quit. If people don't read it because of that then you'll never get the 100 power stones that you are asking for.
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Lord_DisasterCh 26 The Plan Part (2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to felIow_daoist
in the anime Ainz did care about the village after sebas made him remember touchme or whatever the dude's name was. The problem was that the reason Sebas brought out helping was cuz the village was being massacred. Alex didnt expect that he would change Ainz williness to help to such a point that Ainz wouldnt help if asked. Does that answer your question?
Alex began to get irritated and he pointed at the mirror "Look man if you don't help them then the whole village will be massacred, those people are innocent." - LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Ryu_DCh 9 Defense of Carne Village (PT-3)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Lord_DisasterCh 9 Defense of Carne Village (PT-3)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Lord_DisasterCh 26 The Plan Part (2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Lord_DisasterCh 26 The Plan Part (2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to felIow_daoistCh 8 Defense of Carne Village (PT-2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Ryu_DCh 8 Defense of Carne Village (PT-2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Ryofu
Nice catch
This paragraph has been deleted. - LocoWriter9113yrCommentedCh 8 Defense of Carne Village (PT-2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Zachary_O_Neal
The acting like an idiot part based on issieâs parents? Yep remember rias mind controlled them on ep 2 or 3, when she makes up a stupid reason for sleeping naked with issie
He robotically began moving to the door and he continued like that until he was on his seat. It made the others look at him like he was stupid but he had to make sure to keep appearances in case Souna asked them later. She had proven to be quite the untrustful person so he had to carefully plan things. He was still not sure if he had tricked her with his acting based on Issei's parents or if she had just pretended and played along so that she could plan something when he lowered his guard. - LocoWriter9113yrCommentedCh 7 Defense of Carne Village (PT-1)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to zsxcfvbhnmk123
So true lol especially with tysons foods
Rias smiled and shook her head, "Nope, unless the American farms secretly sneak in human meat when they do whatever they have to do to get them in the packages at the store. Look Trey I know that learning that we are devils and that other races exist is overwhelming but we are no different than you. I would appreciate it if you stopped treating us like monsters even if you are just joking." - LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Lord_DisasterCh 26 The Plan Part (2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to Lord_DisasterCh 26 The Plan Part (2)
- LocoWriter9113yrReplied to JustACommonReader
nope, im never making that mistake again haha
Both of the girls stopped playing and the one with violet eyes stood up and walked to a desk and retrieved some papers. She began looking through them and selected one of the files and handed it to him "The class you're in is written here, you can just find it in the school map that you have there. I've read your records from your old school and to be honest I'm not happy with you being here at all. 28 absences and 6 fights, that's not the type of person that I want in this school, you better start getting your self straightened out or else you're gonna have to go." - LocoWriter9113yrReplied to JustACommonReader
haha reminds me of a fight i tried to stop in middle school. my fried was fighting some guy and i tried to pull them apart. in the end my friend hit me and i eneded up pushing him into the other guy and leaving him there. the teacher stopped it a bit later
Both of the girls stopped playing and the one with violet eyes stood up and walked to a desk and retrieved some papers. She began looking through them and selected one of the files and handed it to him "The class you're in is written here, you can just find it in the school map that you have there. I've read your records from your old school and to be honest I'm not happy with you being here at all. 28 absences and 6 fights, that's not the type of person that I want in this school, you better start getting your self straightened out or else you're gonna have to go."