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Zack2311mthReplied to DFP_86Ch 230 Princess Syccheleria's Choice- Zack2312mthCommentedIn the exclusive lounge that only Ralyks and the appropriate authority from KariBlanc to enter, the man of darkness sat comfortably as he spokeX
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Except by stealing from the same person twice within a handful of days. He ain’t that smart dawg.
This meant his opponent wasn't merely a reckless individual, but someone smart enough to recognize how to exercise caution. - Zack2312mthReplied to Senku_san
He didn’t kill the ch-
But women were necessary for producing more Hobgoblins, so eliminating them would be foolish on his part. - Zack2312mthCommentedCh 97 Escape(2)
- Zack2312mthCommented[Remark: You're still trash]
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“Species” is spelled “Species” in the singular and plural form
[Specie: Human] - Zack2313mthCommented
Yeah giving this one a chance but so far characters are coming off as NPCs. These interactions need some help. I do like the idea of the story so far
Both of them could only nod their heads when they heard this. - Zack2313mthCommented"Huh, I seem to have grown taller…" While previously he was about 5 feet or 152 cm, he had now increased by even a foot taller, and his body seemed to have become bulkier and more robust.
- Zack2313mthCommentedCh 22 Quest Completed! Lust Meter!?
- Zack2313mthCommentedStaring back and forth between the two, the young man eventually made up his mind and jumped down into the hole. "My curiosity won't let me rest if I don't get to the bottom of this."
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I have been wondering why he hasn’t been using this. I don’t recall it having any restrictions that would justify saving it as a trump card. If anything it is a utility ability to assist in doing more damage on attacks. Kinda dumb not to use it from the start when fighting a strong opponent.
"[Hunter's Tracking Eyes]." - Zack2314mthCommented'This soldier, does that belong to Raze as well?' Gunther thought. 'Strange powers, incredibly strong in Pagna skills, and now something like this. With all of this going for you, people will be wanting you from all over, just like the Crimson Crane with the Dark Magus..wait a second…'
- Zack2314mthReplied to OverlordXanth
Fair
"It was basically just jungle in all directions, apart from a river a bit further in." Jayce said, summoning his legendary dagger. "I couldn't see any monsters in the vicinity, but it will be better if we stay vigilant." With that, the two moved out towards the river. - Zack2314mthReplied to Anonymux_user
You came to that conclusion after reading the authors description of a snake? That’s tough, good luck man.
A long body could be seen spiraling up, white in color, nearly matching the snow completely. Attached to the long body was a head with red-colored eyes and large fangs. It opened up its mouth, revealing a small split tongue and a hissing sound. It looked almost like a cobra, but it was giant in size, as it was half the height of the trees next to it. - Zack2315mthCommented
Uhh that’s not normal lol
From his build, it was quite clear that this man had worked in physical labor before all this. All the man's hair was slowly turning into a shade of white despite him being in his twenties and there were visible wrinkles on his face. - Zack2315mthCommented
this paragraph is also very similar to the last
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This paragraph pretty much says the same thing as the previous one
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Yeah author is not great at keeping things accurate and consistent. Still entertaining enough of a story tho
HP: 68000/68000 - Zack2315mthCommented
What they are all B-grade? This contradicts the whole “ we only accept A grade and above talents, with the exception of “special” B-grade talents. They can’t all be “special” B-grade talents otherwise that wouldn’t be all that special
"We've only awakened B-level talents. If we were to go, wouldn't it be a near certain death?"