Abe_Pa
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well my dear author, when reading I used the vivid descriptions by words provided to cast an imaginary setting for the story. so pardon me if the terms used bothers me . please that is not to say that you are not doing a good job with the story. it was an honest critique😉
I do not know the culture in the universities in your country but I am a bit surprised to know that you wrote that they have uniforms. in my humble suggestion I think more research to be done to help use the appropriate terms to describe scenarios and the university environment. like the use of classrooms, classmate etc. universities worldwide use 1. lecture halls not classrooms 2. course mate not classmate 3. level 2 or second year students not junior year etc as I said I do not know your country practice so this suggestions is only based on my opinion thank you
university uniforms??? I didn't know universities have uniforms