I never knew Bryan was such a mad scientist

okay I am seriously not liking how everyone is just walking all over Ronan and just taking liberties of his own house like they just own it; also will Ronan get himself a new house elf?

will you please continue this story first before moving on to a new one

okay even I have to admit that was a little harsh

I really don't care for Dumbledore's meddling

well yes I know that I meant why did he just throw the pen away in the chamber I mean couldn't he have just put it in his pocket?

why did he have to throw away his runic pen?

I meant that night during the Christmas holidays when Ronan got obliviated

is Ronan going to get his memory of that night back I would really like to see Ron sweat a little if he knew Ronan remembered also what will you do about Lockhart?

okay so could you please do something about Ron's arrogant personality it's getting to be really annoying

is the guy going to remove the imperius or what

what happened to pettigrew

oh no, does that mean pettigrew gets away with everything?

woo-hoo oleandra caught the snitch

can you let oleandra catch the snitch

I really hope Bryan beats the living daylights ot of Pettigrew

I think that instead of writing the letter, Draco should go to Snape and tell him about Pettigrew and let him deal with it

I'm not sure if that ending part was necessary

that was cold and brutal what she did right there

oh come on oleandra you know Draco is in the wrong here put a stop to it