finally 👌💕

wow ... fascinating 💜 I love the the writing and how it switched between dialogues and narrating I love Arthur Xavier character look so strong and brave just how I like it , I'm so content with the story lines and events too and the missions 💕👌

I liked the way you write without mentioning grammar and stuff, just the way you deliver the words to reach us readers and feel alive as if we are inside the story chapters living with the characters same as they are doing so well , I felt I was part of it , like inside until now and the moment I finish the chapters i'm back to real life but still with the effect these chapters leave on me , that's how effective it is , and I love the characters development and the events progress and especially especially how you mixed between the game and real life and switched it was so cool I can't wait to read more , keep up the good work 💜💕👌

omg , I actually love how this first chapter started easy and quite telling us more about the kind of character Ken has and the development it witnessed , I really love a strong will character , and I also love how it ended like a game in progress I'm so excited for the next chapter and to see the show he's gonna make at his highschool and others reaction .. especially that one bEach girlfriend of his 🌝and let the zombie game begin 👌

I want moooore

I never thought that I would like heaven as much as I do now 💜🌼

oh god ...how I missed this 💜💜love itttt

i looooove itttt continue on moooore magical chapters 🧡🥰

Truuuuue ....I really liked your opinions . coming from a mature person .

Can u guys write your opinions about the chapters down here in the comments please ?

Omg saaaame 😍😍😍😍just what I was thinking 💜👌😂

No , don't forget that at first they were both obliged to do it , neither of them chose to , but since the mark is fading and with a little help from both zarin and iren I think they can both find their true mates . I understand that u are attached to zamiel's character and I respect that I just said things from my own POV 🤗👌

I really would like to see heaven with zarin as a couple , and I think it's better if zamiel help zarin understands his feelings for heaven and finally be together and as for zamiel I think lonely iren would be a great match for him , don't u agree ? 😍💜👌🌻

Saaaaame

I just need Lucian to freaking remember hazel :-)