Don_Esteban

the void hungers..

imagine a 13 yo boy kicking a creature almost as large as a horse and sending it flying... bruh

quite a few grammar mistakes in this one, didn't expect that. Still enjoyed reading the chapter, thank you very much. Also Velea was the best girl, shame. Could've just offed any- or everyone else to make him participate in the war effort again.

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actually he contradicts his statement like one paragraph later, this MC has lost his mind xD

the last two chapters were truly amazing, I really enjoy your style of writing. Looks like this heist will be a lot trickier than expected and I'm all in for that. Can't wait until you release the next chapters :D

you write emotions really well imo, it's a refreshing change to the usual webnovel landscape. There have only been very few fanfics that made me feel this much for the characters. I am quite eager to read your next chapters. Thank you very much for this great story :D