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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
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    It us okay. Get back to the track and made yourself up. I and the ones who read it will wait for you. Good luck!

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    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
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    Sometimes u just need to walk down the stairs and fell of. My legs deal lots of pain to me. So I couldn't take my balance so i dropped down... Now i really hate hard athletics. Then i remembered the word i couldn't remember the whole day. Funny situation.

    Ch 45 A convenient fall
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    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
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    xneds uhws vvzc vqni abarvxh ujos ajwd yqyp" I think u have just pushed random keys to write it. Who thinks the same?

    Ch 41 The big bad atrocity
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    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
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    that sounds like german language

    Nick knew what he needed to do for this creature, it was to feed it. How or what that meant is what made Nick shudder, this creature could've eaten every reindeer and human in this forest. So why didn't it began to stir a wrongness in Nick. "Ar-are you from this di-di-dimension?" He was scared, he was legitimately scared. He stuttered like Liz not from shyness or the lack of speech for so long, he was terrified of the creature and his guess was right. "NooOo, Frem othr place, werds get bedder?"
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    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
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    xneds uhws vvzc vqni abarvxh ujos ajwd yqyp..... what the hell?

    Nick's wandering had led him hear the giggles coming what he suspected to be the wind spirit. The sound eventually disappeared, but Nick felt wrong. Like a feeling of being watched, he looked at the gecko that sat on his shoulder it seemed he felt the same. "Bruni you can feel that too can't you?" He watched as Bruni nodded. Now the question was what was watching them and where. The two were heading toward a random direction. Then their walking stopped, Bruni was confused by Nick's stop. Truth was Nick felt the change in mana he sensed the flow shift. "Who are you and do you dare to show yourself!" Nick knew something was close, it had somehow hid itself from Nick's senses. A gruff voice spoke out in a language Nick didn't understand fully. "xncds uhws vvzc vqni abarvxh ujos ajwd yqyp!" Nick had no idea and Bruni was even more startle by the jumbled words. It was almost as if someone put a bunch of letters into random letter generator to form some fucked up sentence. "What the fuck? I didn't understand a word of that." "Wcrds vrt dilrfercert te spkera wth grive is temith." A large creature walked out from the trees, Bruni shuddered and backed into Nick. The creature was similar to the more animal like wendigo, but the creature was not a wendigo. It had sharp antlers that were like an antelopes but then spiked backwards at a 90 degree angle. The creature had four arms that were as thick as Nick's waste. Its hands were meant for digging but had thumbs similar to that of a human. It had a wolfish face but its fur was red and maroon. Symbols and patterns in maroon fur were covering its body. It had scales covering parts of its body, each piece looked like the same material as a turtle shell. This creature looked starved and it stood 8ft tall making it clear, how malnourished the creature was. Nick tried to check the creatures stats, but he got nothing that he couldn't already guess. The creatures name was Duelle, everything was question marks except for one skill that indicated he was the earth spirit.
    altalt
    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Replied to SpadesPenndragon

    I actually have an idea of the new name if the title. How about..... Magical book: Disney adventures? I think this is not really big title. Any other ideas?

    Ch 39 Problems
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    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Commented

    Lol I think u have really good memory

    Ch 38 A very fiery spirit
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    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Commented

    Hey, to many questions and not less answers in the same chapter! It will take a while to figure out everything. And thanks for the tip for IPSC tip. This works as a pip boy in fallout, yeah?

    Ch 2 A serious anomaly
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    The Lunar Cultivator
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Commented

    hmmmmm im pretty sure is is like character creator. Goid idea, Spades!

    Holy shit that worked? Tango didn't care for any elaboration and just said "My name is Tango Fengii then". He then tried to walk off but his father grabbed him, "Now i am glad you chose a name but you still need to go through the ceremony to unlock your cultivation, now as an Atawashi you should have the talents in wind, metal or fire. Now i know you have been dreading this day due to the many tests showing now affinities, but i want you to know i will be proud none the less. I just worry about how your mother will react." His father was crouching during the last part and he sighed he then told the crow to guide his son to the ceremony grounds.
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    The Lunar Cultivator
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
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    As i know from my life experiences, more info - more confusion, less info - also lots of confusion. HELP ME IM CONFUSED!

    So that's what he did he followed he had no information and was extremely confused. As he got closer to a large palace his eyes began to widen. What the fuck. He walked through pearly marble halls filled with gold and jade ornate patterns. If this Crow was calling him young master that meant this was technically HIS home. "Ah, my son you are finally here, how could you run on your solstice day.
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    The Lunar Cultivator
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Commented

    hey, look here! we have some iron eagle

    Tango woke up on the ground under some trees. He was confused because he definitely killed himself, he looked at his body besides a bruised knee his was relatively fine...HOLY CRAP HE WAS A CHILD. He thought of what the hell happened rapidly, he opened his IPSC opened and he saw only corrupted data. He sighed "run decorruption program" and then closed it. He looked down at himself again he had what looked like feathers? Yes they were in fact feathers metallic ones at that. He was getting more confused by the second.
    altalt
    The Lunar Cultivator
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Commented

    It is time to make bomb better than Nuke!

    Then it broke and he exploded, the explosion was so big it rocked a few dozen solar systems surrounding him. After all his suit was the most powerful suit there is, it had a exotic energy core powering it. Except all it did for him in the gravitational pull of a black hole was make him have a swifter death. Detonating a exotic energy core was considered a Crime against the universe due to it's horrifying explosive power.
    altalt
    The Lunar Cultivator
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Replied to SpadesPenndragon

    Yes, It is rather good start for the great novel. i also like space and it remind me my childhood dream, to know more about the space. Spades' books are great and i think they will be in the top one day.

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    The Lunar Cultivator
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Commented

    I think the idea about spirits is good. I think the longer i read, the better it will become. Thanks for the chapter, Spades!

    Ch 36 Enchanted forest
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    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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  • JayStorm
    JayStorm3yr
    Commented

    thanks for the tip, it really helped.

    {1}Snuck=is sneaked but in the past-present tense
    altalt
    My sister was a Disney fan, now I am going through hell.
    Fantasy · SpadesPenndragon
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