Elwoodthebear

??? How did Emily get into this realm if she's not part of the group yet

must've missed the line where she ran a scan on him. thanks :)

his registered sync rate from chapter 1 was 0% though?

He doesn't remain crippled. The reason he is crippled in the first place was planned by the author to have a greater meaning in the rest of the story too.

Ahh I see I see. Your book does start really good so that's why I was disappointed enough to write a review (sorry) when I noticed plot inconsistencies. I must've missed when you said you were going through and re-editing everything, but I'll make sure to read it again once you've edited everything and are confident enough to make the chapters paid :). I do think this book could be really good.

I enjoyed the first three or so chapters. After that, it seems like the author switched to using AI to write it. Basically just a bunch of inconsistencies in system goals and plot progression and stuff. All 56 chapters are currently free, which is a plus, but I'm not going to be continuing unfortunately. Shame, cuz it seemed potentially good.

She's never met Lyra before. I felt this last chapter too but did the author accidentally skip a chapter?

Did this book change authors or did they start to write everything using AI or something? First it was forgetting the one of each product a day limit and now they're selling random things that he never unlocked? this makes me less interested in continuing on with the story, not going to lie

For a 30 day month, that's less than one monster per minute

I don't usually give out reviews often but after over a year of reading this I feel as though I probably should. This is undoubtedly my favourite novel on this platform. It's the only one where I have actually ever spent coins on because I've NEEDED to read more. The story is paced super well and is always so interesting to see what the main character does and how he gets more powerful. I think I've reread everything like four or five times at this point, it's really just that fun to read. The main character actually has well thought out character development and you can see his personality change and grow as he progresses through the story, which adds a lot of depth to it and is really something refreshing to see on webnovel. You can tell that the overarching plot itself was actually planned from the beginning and hasn't just been made up on the spot as the author has gone along. Sub-plots and things that occur in the novel actually have a greater purpose rather than the typical common webnovel "academy/school arcs" that usually happen when the author doesn't know what to write about, and the character has a clear goal and purpose that evolves and changes as he grows. The way the author writes about the side characters helps you to get emotionally attached to them and gives them depth, which also usually doesn't happen in webnovel. I'm excited to keep reading this and see it all the way through to the end.