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Half_Boiled_Man

Half_Boiled_Man

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I adore poetry to the point of dying; I love romances, and comedy. I want to get better at writing so I will take every opinion seriously. That said feel free to talk to me, and judge my writing.

2020-07-31 JoinedUnited States
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man1mth
    Posted

    This story is genuinely good. Characters are engaging and interesting. While the theme may come off as overused. Its pulled off in a unique way. The different point of views provided give you a really good understanding of the story. All in all, props to tge author good job.

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    Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life
    Contemporary Romance · sagorika_adhikari
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man1mth
    Posted

    While its still early I'm quite liking the story so far. The main character while not the kindest person is still likeable. And the world building is pretty good. The system of how the world works isn't confusing at all which adds to the entretainment of it. Quite excited to see how this will turn out.

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    Strongest Death Knight
    Video Games · Pill_Guy
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man1mth
    Commented

    The many points of view get dizzy at times, but so far so good. The characters are entretaining. Must say props to you so far.

    Ch 2 Acclimatization
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    Redeeming The Golden Ticket To Life
    Contemporary Romance · sagorika_adhikari
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man1mth
    Posted

    This a lightning fast, engaging action piece of a novel. While the writing is at times clumsy. With its grammar misha** and far too wordy lines. It's fun to read regardless. Characters are interesting despite how fast the story around them moves. Which in turn leads to not losing anytime with the storytelling. Props to the author writing this, will keep reading for sure.

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    HITODAMA { SPIRIT ORBS }
    Martial Arts · R_F_T_S
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man1mth
    Commented

    A bit too wordy, regardless, fun fast paced story. Quite enjoying the naruto and DB references. Will keep reading, hope it gets better.

    Ch 6 Fight Night II
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    HITODAMA { SPIRIT ORBS }
    Martial Arts · R_F_T_S
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man1mth
    Replied to R_F_T_S

    will fix, thanks for the tid bit

    "Sorry, I'm just super excited you see..." While Jishi began machine-gunning words with a skip in his step. I began fidgeting with the controller of my implant that lied in the right pocket of my black pants. Maxing and muting my hearing, attempting to ignore at least 50% of Jishi's infinite volley. Burstin out in internal laughter, I continue for a few minutes. Until he realised what I was doing and used sign language to relay the words. Tears crawled up to my eyes as one thought crossed my mind, "Damn it".
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    Convict of Silence
    Realistic Fiction · Half_Boiled_Man
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man3mth
    Replied to MichelleLeeee

    Thank you, I really appreciate your kind words.

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    Convict of Silence
    Realistic Fiction · Half_Boiled_Man
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man3mth
    Posted

    The descriptions of every person in the story are extremely vivid. Like seeing the actual person breathing next to you. The story is interesting in a sense that its tension keeps you reading. Love this book and expect more of it to come.

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    Pandora's Curse: Key To Immortality
    Fantasy Romance · SleepyKola
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Commented

    Wow, this is really good as of now. But this kid Alex, I unironically want to hit him. Regardless its super good so far.

    Ch 8 ALEX
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    DEAR BULLY, DEAR VICTIM
    Teen · Roselia_Black
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Replied to

    yes but not that hard core of a fan

    A nervous voice leaves the piano in D sharp, as an ominous adagio lurks around the room. "I'm scared" it cried elegantly and fearfully. Steadily tuning up into an allegro, after which I forgot where I was. I played the piano in 2/4 times, once again wrestling Beethoven for his words. "Les adieux" resounded in the room, its voice turning to one of bliss as a smile crawled up my lips.
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    Convict of Silence
    Realistic Fiction · Half_Boiled_Man
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Posted

    The writing isn't too wordy so its easy to follow. The characters are well designed. From there clueless approach to a new world. To the growth they gain through constant interaction with the world. And the over all world is described in a simple fashion. Which leaves room for it to grow through the characters. All in all real good story I recommend to anyone looking for something interesting.

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    I Have to be an Alchemist?
    LGBT+ · Mischwin
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Commented

    Pretty nice so far but do mind the grammar mistakes. There have been few but you should still fix them you can.

    Ch 3 A Place to Stay
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    I Have to be an Alchemist?
    LGBT+ · Mischwin
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Commented

    An knteresting start, I feel intrigued by the foreshadowing. I'm excited to see how the world builds from here.

    Ch 1 Welcome Party
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    I Have to be an Alchemist?
    LGBT+ · Mischwin
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Posted

    The world is one reflecting creativity. The characters are pretty good. The writing is easy to follow and attentive to detail. I do expect the world to unfold my expectations as it progresses. So far it has done great. Keep it up.

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    The Trials Of Adira
    Fantasy Romance · AGirlHasNoName20
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Commented

    The story seems intriguing. A million crossroads come to mind by the end of the prologue. While I would've liked more details on the castle, I think its a pretty good starting line. I will keep reading so please keep writing.

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    The Trials Of Adira
    Fantasy Romance · AGirlHasNoName20
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Replied to AGirlHasNoName20

    Thank you so much. I will keep in mind the wordiness thank you for pointing it out.

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    Convict of Silence
    Realistic Fiction · Half_Boiled_Man
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Commented

    While the atmosphere was quite tragic I think its pretty good. But some more imagery in regards to the funeral wpuld have been great. Regardless keep it up.

    Ch 9 In a Struggle and a Visit from a Half Human Being
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    The Urge
    War&Military · Averston
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Commented

    I think your doing a great job at hyping up the mysteries keep it up.

    Ch 8 It All Came Back and Scouting
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    The Urge
    War&Military · Averston
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Posted

    So this author portrays a zombie apocalypse scenario through a intriguing cast. Catching my interest near instantly. The backgrounds basically build themselves as you read on, while you enjoy the characters that engage along with his story. I would really recommend you give this story a try. Because even though it's barely even begun, it has proven to have quite the potential to get better.

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    The Urge
    War&Military · Averston
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  • Half_Boiled_Man
    Half_Boiled_Man4mth
    Replied to nomicsskeleton

    Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.

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    Convict of Silence
    Realistic Fiction · Half_Boiled_Man
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