I adore poetry to the point of dying; I love romances, and comedy. I want to get better at writing so I will take every opinion seriously. That said feel free to talk to me, and judge my writing.
This story is genuinely good. Characters are engaging and interesting. While the theme may come off as overused. Its pulled off in a unique way. The different point of views provided give you a really good understanding of the story. All in all, props to tge author good job.
While its still early I'm quite liking the story so far. The main character while not the kindest person is still likeable. And the world building is pretty good. The system of how the world works isn't confusing at all which adds to the entretainment of it. Quite excited to see how this will turn out.
This a lightning fast, engaging action piece of a novel. While the writing is at times clumsy. With its grammar misha** and far too wordy lines. It's fun to read regardless. Characters are interesting despite how fast the story around them moves. Which in turn leads to not losing anytime with the storytelling. Props to the author writing this, will keep reading for sure.
will fix, thanks for the tid bit
The descriptions of every person in the story are extremely vivid. Like seeing the actual person breathing next to you. The story is interesting in a sense that its tension keeps you reading. Love this book and expect more of it to come.
yes but not that hard core of a fan
The writing isn't too wordy so its easy to follow. The characters are well designed. From there clueless approach to a new world. To the growth they gain through constant interaction with the world. And the over all world is described in a simple fashion. Which leaves room for it to grow through the characters. All in all real good story I recommend to anyone looking for something interesting.
The world is one reflecting creativity. The characters are pretty good. The writing is easy to follow and attentive to detail. I do expect the world to unfold my expectations as it progresses. So far it has done great. Keep it up.
The story seems intriguing. A million crossroads come to mind by the end of the prologue. While I would've liked more details on the castle, I think its a pretty good starting line. I will keep reading so please keep writing.
So this author portrays a zombie apocalypse scenario through a intriguing cast. Catching my interest near instantly. The backgrounds basically build themselves as you read on, while you enjoy the characters that engage along with his story. I would really recommend you give this story a try. Because even though it's barely even begun, it has proven to have quite the potential to get better.