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Thanks to the author for starting to translate this fanfic, an extremely good piece of work in recent times. Thanks also for the link to the original, thanks to which the novel was read faster. Let's get to the positives: * there is no super power from the very beginning, * there is no Pokemon like a harem, * slow and harmonious relationships with the heroines, but in my opinion a hasty ending, where there is normal development and only Android No. 18 and Sykes got the end, and Soifon and Torumi were simply left off-screen in the epilogue. * in the end they tried, I don’t know, to cut off the power of ms? Otherwise, I don’t know, perhaps the limitations of the World. V in the end he doesn't have the superpower to destroy universes
I'm sorry, of course, but where are the developers? They have a big anomaly going around the world, but there is no news from them. They paid attention to Greed, When he took the book ahead of time. And ms has 4 legendary classes. If it’s about the fact that he is us and not a player, then there should be even more attention to him, because he changes their plot of the world.They watched Baal when he played with the players, and now he openly kills 100 thousand users
Hello author, I really liked your work, I don’t know if you will read this, but please download additional chapters. I went to your discord and roughly understood your situation, but forget about this good story and all the fans who are waiting for a continuation, it’s kind of sad, I went to your patron and saw that there are 20 more finished chapters written half a year ago . Please put at least 1 chapter a month, which will be a holiday for all fans of this story
So in the modern world there is polygamy. I don't understand where the time is. Yes, men used to have several women, but it was a wife, and the rest were concubines. This is mostly related to politics and profit, daughters were simply given away without their consent for the benefit of the family. And I wrote about the voluntary desire to share my soulmate with a third person
the idea from above about the beast is not bad, since the legend of Remy himself is frankly average, lower than Jeanne, he is the second hero of her story. he is more like an addition to her story than his own story. I ask you not to delay the stories after the death of the heroes, but to quickly go to their meeting in the war.
Thanks for the chapter, And also for the lack of a harem . I never understood the voluntary consent of women to a harem, for me love is when two people give everything 100% to each other. And the harem is, in fact, the division of male attention by the number of women, where Each gives all of herself, and receives only 10% of approximate attention . People are greedy creatures by nature, I don't understand how they can easily share one guy. For me, it's just not self-respect. For me, a Harem is possible only in a nervous relationship where the other side Exceeds the other in status, like master and slave