with the constant saying of white flesh in the past few chapters, I'm starting to have a weird hunch that the author is a cannibal writer 👀 very sus

why would a god apologize to a mortal? confusing plot already...

my boi Nolan is back 🎉

Nolan!!! you're back!!! wohoooo

Nolan!!! you are alive and dead at the time lnao

Nolan, my brother, my man has been replaced. you will be missed 🙏

ain't gon lie, i only layed honkai star rail for 2 hours and only made it through the tutorial hahaha! nonetheless I still enjoyed the story even with barely any knowledge of who and what is being introduced as the author introduces each character very organically through the thoughts of others or dialogues between them. anyway, that's my review i hope the author continues the story as it is genuinely a good concept and fun to read fic.

huh, so nobunaga from fate

A good quality fanfic. It has been a long time since I read anything good and new in this app. I hope you continue this wonderful fiction you are writing. I'm hoping you get more inspiration to continue writing and rest if you are having writer's block.

Tldr: Good novel to pass time. Pacing is decent, world building is good, characters pretty expressive, and power ups are reasonable.Now for my opinion. I don't like this novel's MC very much. It is a preference but I don't like how the author casually mentions that his personality used to be more cuthroat then becomes a softie after gaining memories from his other self.I wouldn't minded much but then it got really frustrating when his enemies even gets spared. And the one taking control was someone so ruthless that he gained a synonym as an emperor of destruction but just because of a some woman's who is familiar to him, he spared some of the enemies? Not even killing the culprit. (church fight part)I saw this coming from the earlier chapters when he spared the people robbing him but still pissed me and gave me a bad impression of the mc when it still is ongoing for the rest novel.From that point I dropped the novel because I more or less know where the direction of the novel is gonna.All in all, a 6/10 novel. Not too bad, just good to pass the time.

In my experience as a reader of many books and written a few samples of stories myself. As long as you explain things decently about the lore in honkai, it is enough for anyone to understand the story.Think of it as men meeting each other without knowing each others name but still laughing, joking, and jovially having a great time.

you really took tuba and turn her to an actually cat 😂

try "using my name" instead.

a master "is" responsible.

scratch that, put a coma instead 😂. I misread that one

I shall perform a master-servanr with "you" not me.

poor jhin, his balls almost broke 😂

his to her I mean

his should be replaced to she

replace throw with threw