Ooowh yeahhhh, i am sooooo rooting for the mc!!! Do your thing mate, i hope you built a brilliant kingdom, I. AM. INVESTED!!! TAKE MY POWERSTONES

I dont know mate, kinda dont like the idea hes gonna be in butler clothes... With the way you make him out, you are literally turning him into a glorified butler... That kinda sucks mate, i expected a badass demon soldier bodyguard. Shoulda let him keep his uniform, hell shoulda upgraded it so he looks like some special ops guy, woulda been a lot cooler than a butler. I mean, screw that it "looks out of place" shoulda let him be special. I dont know, its really dissapointing.

YESS!!! MORE CHAPTERRSSS THIS BE SOOO GOODDDD

Great bloody chapter, best 100 fiction without a doubt. Absolutely beautiful. Keep writing please

Nahmahn, take your time. I want to see him slowly take lagertha as his daughter. Build up his own viking empire, altough i do agree that he should atleast go get alice. Havent seen her in forever, barely heard of her in a while. So yeah, i do want you to take your time and build it all up, cuz that would be cool. But i would rather he do it with his wife by his side.

I NEED A NEW CHAPTER DAMNITT!!!! PLEASE DONT DROP, THIS IS WAYYYY TO GOOD TO BE DROPPED, DONT BLOODY DROP PLEASSEEEE

Daammnnnn this was a good chapter mate, bloody well done

DROPPED!!! Bruh, your barely anywhere with this story, but your already getting to the next. While making a politicians promise, COM'ON EVERY hiatus story has this same excuse. Atleast be honest about it.

I know right, its always the same thing. "owh, ill come back after the other one." But than half way through the other one, he starts a new one and well have to wait for that one...

Honestly mate, im extremely dissapointed with how long it all takes. Almost 30 chapters in and no sexual tension to speak of. Eventough this world has the easiest excuse to make a harem quick, mental health and personal safety. Sooo... Its not worth it anymore, dont really feel like waiting for it like its gonna be special in anyway. Cuz honestly its not. Point of advice if your character is generally a dick then your smut scene has no value, its just there for a cheap turn on. But when you take your time, you act as if its special. Which honestly feels even cheaper.

Dropped

Wouw your pretty toxic mate

Dropped, i mean it was already a pleasure read. But now you keep fucking around with his powers and slaves.... This just messy and boring as shit.

Holy shit the pen thing is brilliantttt

Yeahhhh no, the harry potter ruined it for me. Sorry bro, dropped.

Altough extremly cute and well needed, i want skme ACTUAL ScarletPhoenix action!!! And not the practically married couple stuff we have now, but something significant. They to cute damnitt

NonononononononononoNO!!!!! UPDATE GODDAMNIT, I DID NOT JUST READ YOI GODDAMN NOVEL TILL 5.50 AM JUST FOR YOU TO DROP IT. I NEED MORE ATHINATA SHIP MATERIAL!!! I NEED MORE DAMNIT, MORE I TELL YOU!!!

I goddamn ship athena and hinata sooo hard, my gohd its sooo unbelievably cute. That.. OUR ninja way, mhm that had me

Mate, its getting a bit boring. All hes doing is plunder this plunder that. Like take elia, he claims her as his and then leaves. Has enough time to do anything with her really but nahh.. Just leave for what looks like weeks.

Gohd i dont know why i love this story so much, but i do... Its ffing brilliant mate. Cant wait for more