I've been reading this story for a while now, and it is truly fantastic. I personally have a hard time not purchasing the rights to buy extra chapters early. The story is strong and fast paced, and characters are memorable. My only gripe is how short I felt the beginning was, but I prefer slow burn and this series has a nice but of both.[img=recommend]

old doevm!

don't listen to this guy

i like this idea, hci is quite dangerous but it would take time to do damage even concentrated if what you hit wasn't vulnerable i.e. eyes*. why not go father by adding in say when he breathes, he's pushing out co2 and co in large doses making the opponents drowsy or making sure they stay asleep

omg, @random_writer . laser pointer! while lich doevm was working on light magic, he started small with regular light magic then focusing the light into beams before going big like the spell in the war arc. lich doevm would wanna find the extent of how beans could be used and main difference in ratios in heat or whatever with size and intensity of light not to mention conealability as in how some beans of light are invisible to the naked eye while others aren't maybe relating to humidity our something. ** also cats and laser pointers

fell

doevm elero, the ship appears to still be in the harbor

you can tell how much doevm cares about Frey with his actions rather than his internal monologue, he seems to refuse to let Frey waste his life being hurt by his sister.