Phoenix1505
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Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 465 Top Genius- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 464 Shine
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 460 Breakthrough
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 458 Excitment
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 456 Super Domain
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 455 Domain Classification
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 454 Epsilon Domain
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 453 Adventure
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 451 Beautiful
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 450 The 4th Continent
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 448 Amazing View
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 446 No surprises
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 445 The Universe Is So Big
- Phoenix15051mthCommented
First I want to thank you for the chapter. Then to the feedback: Your english improves since the very beginning of this book, but the last 100 or so chapters the improve is really noticeably and this chapter now is one of the best you have ever written. The language is easy to read, easy to understand but complex enough to engage and not to bore. What some other user mentioned is that the chapters are shorter then normally (can a chapter really be to long?) but if this is necessary to improve your writing further then this is a tradeoff I can live with. All in all I really enjoy your book and hope we all can accompany Jiang Fan further on his journey!
Ch 443 Leaving the Endless Star Territory - Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 442 Sweep Everything
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 441 Super Star Island
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 440 Desperate
- Phoenix15051mthCommentedCh 436 Choice
- Phoenix15052mthCommentedCh 435 One of The Best
- Phoenix15052mthCommentedCh 433 Trail Reward