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The chapter is long oooo. There are several parts in the story which built up suspense, one the part of the statue where weeds weren't growing, that really will pique interest and the other is the last part,the game. Knowing what it is and how Leonidas will fare is fascinating. Good work by the way
I love the amazing plot twist of the story of the demons, based on how it started, one would think there were only seven demons but now, there's a whole herd of them with even demon lords. This just opens up the story with greater potential and more suspense, also creates the intrigue of finding out what the strength and goals of the demon lords are. Great work, man!!!!!!!!
I am sure if you made this part into a manga or anime, Edward and Amaka would have a 'WTF' expression on their faces.
I see what you did there, made reference to our local artiste, hope we won't see David singing like Davido, it will be somehowđđ
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Really nice, I like how fast things are explained. Great work, keep it up.