sage10001

Who is Selena? Is this Nathan 2.0?

“The fact that the Human race does not have a Dao Lord was artificialy made true” (they were all killed/died of age without other humans becoming new Dao Lords) The character is just implying that they know what brought the Human race to their knees. Or maybe they were even involved.

Thats a lot of freedom to be sealed in one galaxy

The first chapter dude sure is a mystery

The death missions worked! They trained lex to fear the system and be overjoyed at the smallest thing

Its got a verys strong hook for an opening chapter and im interested to see where all that goes.

He is going to either find 2+ items on the list within a year or find out that she sent him on a wild goose chase.

I don’t like the way Caleb talks. It doesn’t feel cohesive/weird enough to be his own accent/weird way of speaking but its just different enough to make me think “what part of that feels wrong? Something is wrong but I can’t put my finger on it.” Otherwise seems written well i was just super distracted by how one character was talking.

And last time he needed to be completely sealed off from other realms to have a time skip. Wonder how that would happen naturally