Thank you so much! 🧡🥺

Thank you! 🥺

Thank you so much! 🧡

Can’t believe I’m doing this but here goes... Shameless author here! 🥰 I’ve worked so hard on this particular piece of literature so I need this to gain more recognition! I believe once you start reading you won’t be able to stop (not to toot my own horn but I mean *shrug* it ain’t a lie). If you enjoy adventurous mystery with A LOT of romance then this is the book for you! Pleace take the time to review and maybe even give ** (?) Hahaha 🧡

Thank you! 🧡

This is such a fun book to read! I enjoy how quirky and f-the-world 18 year old Cassie is, it’s hilarious! 🧡 I did spot some inconsistencies with the tenses, some are in past tense where it should be present, and the vocab can tend to be overly repeated, but overall, such a great job!

Fatal injury insinuates that the victim is dead so maybe don’t use ‘fatal’? 😳 just a suggestion! 🧡

Love this sentence! 🧡

Continued* 🥰

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The constant change of point of view is alright but the first to third person changes are very disconcerting. Very unprofessional.

What a king 😂 tha’s all he says at the beginning of a ceremony?

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Yes, that’s why she’s kind of the main protagonist here.

I really love the overall plot of your story! Although, I did see quite a bit of grammatical error but I’m not sure if you wanted them corrected or not. Overall, though, such a great start![img=recommend]

Awesome beginning!

Is your story past tense or present? I see some inconsistency with the next paragraph 😊

I really like this description of her. It shows her true beauty very much.