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Kyle_Kingsmaker3mthReplied to Daoist6mM4RaCh 32 Important notice- Kyle_Kingsmaker4mthReplied to Daoist6mM4RaCh 31 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 30: The land of the ancients [V]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker4mthReplied to Blue_RobinCh 31 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 30: The land of the ancients [V]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker4mthReplied to Rosana_MarquesCh 31 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 30: The land of the ancients [V]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker4mthReplied to AWESOME_01
More or less. He doesn't use it because it might get interference due to monsters' presence, which would be worse for him.He uses hand signals as a form to community because he mostly works alone, so he didn't need to communicate much until now.And as a writer, I didn't want to simply solve this by "taking away" the disability the character has.Btw, thanks for reading and for the feedback. 🍷😎
Ch 22 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 21: The First Exam [I] - Kyle_Kingsmaker4mthReplied to Rosana_MarquesCh 30 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 29: The land of the ancients [IV]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker4mthReplied to Blue_Robin
How so? I didn't understand.Btw, thanks for the feedback! 🍷😎
Did you like this chapter's curiosity? Or was it too weak? - Kyle_Kingsmaker4mthReplied to Rosana_MarquesCh 29 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 28: Prepare for trouble! And make it double!
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Rosana_MarquesCh 28 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 27: The land of the ancients [III]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Angry_gaming
No worries.Seeing your comment, I remembered to update it in Ko-fi too.You can also see it on my Ko-fi's page if you aren't comfortable entering the Discord community.(It's free)The link is on the novel's description, I won't post here to avoid my comment being excluded.Thanks for reading and for the feedback! 🍷😎
Ch 28 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 27: The land of the ancients [III] - Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Angry_gamingCh 28 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 27: The land of the ancients [III]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Blue_RobinCh 28 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 27: The land of the ancients [III]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Blue_RobinCh 27 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 26: The land of the ancients [II]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Rosana_MarquesCh 27 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 26: The land of the ancients [II]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Rosana_MarquesCh 26 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 25: The land of the ancients [I]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Blue_RobinCh 26 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 25: The land of the ancients [I]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Rosana_MarquesCh 25 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 24: The First Exam [IV]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Blue_Robin
I see, I will think of something related to those things for the next curiosity.Thanks for the feedback! 🍷😎
Did you like this chapter's curiosity? Or was it too weak? - Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Blue_RobinCh 25 Hardcore Fantasy – Chapter 24: The First Exam [IV]
- Kyle_Kingsmaker5mthReplied to Blue_Robin
It wasn't my intention to do a suspense but noted.Thanks for the feedback. 🍷😎
I tried a slightly different writing style in this chapter, I tried to be a bit more descriptive. I'm still trying to better my writing, so I would appreciate your constructive feedback. Was it too lacking? Too vague? Was the pace too slow?