MJ_SB

its another great novel,you won't regret it. the mc was a modern man reborn in cultivation world. with a op system. of course, what would you expect to a chinese novel,its always have been harem type.

falcon - magical beast goose - name of the flying technique

Top Tier Providence: Secretly Cultivate for a Thousand Years is the exact name of this great novel.

why is this whole fanfic story edited? and alot of events got skipped to the next immediately?why is that author san?

hey author san,this fanfic was good,its enjoyable to read. But i seem to noticed that this fanfic seemed different than the first time i read it, i mean in every chapter it always like it got skip to another event like vibe. Way different when i first read it that its more long in chapter and more complete.

the plot story was good at first,but in the middle it got messed up you know. why is the story was so random and messy with following events. and the following sentences is so hard to digest without deep knowledge in english literature. random events, random conversations, don't have connections with the following sentences. and you just still processing what the conversations all about but it got skip to the next situations. hays life is so hard nowadays.

whats these messed up conversation and plotstory? its just like im still processing what is this all about,then came the end suddenly?

i bet the author is also a virgin hehe

it is more like a specialist than manipulator

it feel more like he got burden when he started a relationship and this story become a typical love story fanfic..so frustrating it destroyed the great background