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This entire dialogue section feels off, almost like it is a bunch of video game characters

He knows

TO WHO??? To who???

Who on earth is he not revealing it to? Himself, I really think the author should think more what he makes his characters say and think.

This can be a great book, but just like some of the other books which this author wrote, its grammar is terrible. Please just hire an editor or at least use a spelling checker, and it isn't just single mistakes certain words are just consistently spelled wrong. Also, if you are going to make an MC which swears a lot to give him a variety of swears to use, I am so sick of fucking, or as they say fuking.

You mean say, maybe use a spelling checker. If you don't have an editor.

I guess this is the end?

I don't think the Joker actually pays taxes, but that comic was wild.

Why are you using AI slop for characters wich already have art for them? If you think you aren't stealing because you use ai you clearly don't understand how AI works.

Me when women