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I never truly understood the point of tràkata, It feels useless against jedi / sith wich can usually detect that they are in danger and leaves you open. Unless you use multiple sabers and use on defensively and one offensively. Honestly Grievous would have slaughtered even more jedi if he used it.

Yknow this is less of a writer's note, and is more fitting of an editors note or translators note. If you could please confirm you are actually the writer?

This might just be a guess but I wouldn't be suprised if the author is just copy and pasting and potentially stealing this fanfic from somewhere and accidently pasted the same part twice.

If you are just a regular guy, the chances of becoming a space marine are close to none. Actually can girls not become space marines? I know they don't exist as far as I know.

Stupefy? Any other kind of magic? You are in a world where children are learning how to use advanced combat magic and your criminals are resorting to physical kidnapping?

"Hello, yes I know that your friends and family are homeless but I want fanfic pls." Grow up.

Just noticed how quickly I got here. It hasn't even uploaded for 5 minutes yet

Getting paid for your writing is good, even if it's just a hobby. If you can like assure your novel gets completed then opening a patreon isn't a bad idea.

My prediction is going to be that Dumbledore is currently reliving his sister's dead over and over right now.