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why did the author even created an original mc if he's just going to add more OC to match him. So far the plot still follows the canon. marcel died, annie sealed etc. His existence brought nothing to the story.
almost like he's the protagonist instead of your mc
that's really stupid
Too much use of A.I. Inconsistent names Too much inconsistency. It's like the author just left it to chatgpt to write and figure out the rest
she never learns
yes yes. why do you keep repeating everything 🤬
wtf is happening, they already came out of the room in the previous chapter and now they're inside again??? The beginning chapters was good then it went downhill with the heavy use of A.I.