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this is what i hate in this fanfic. The author gave him SSS rank haki, and yet he keep buffing the enemies. Why bother giving him a boost then? just copy the original atp
they speak like old farts
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What, is he eren now?
yes. profound and significant
too many determinations. Did you make this with A.I.? there's no inconsistency so far but the actions were lackluster.
the loss of his friends came out of nowhere. It's lackluster
there's no details like how did he get to the nape? even the titan dummy training was skipped