Alarzon

Enjoyed reading uptil nowThis has potential Don't drop it

Really liked the ongoing story. I love the gritty and dark fantasy mode you are writing in. The mc is a stoic and mysterious, not that faceslapping trope.

Nice going uptil now. Please don't drop it. Let the plot and world building kicked in. D&D and Tolkien vibes are definitely here. The MC is not generic naive or horny. At most he is an opportunist. Plot sounds realistic. Not overpowered or shitty system driven. A regular man trapped in another world. Good going.Liked it.

Mooore

Kitsune please