OniBriman
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A frustrated writer... https://nanowrimo.org/participants/jthyme Cover photo by Kelly Sikkema on Unsplash
2020-07-25 JoinedPhilippines
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OniBriman1yrReplied to Andy_DNEThis book has been deleted.- OniBriman1yrCommented
yes
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i feel like this is too verbose. I suggest editing for clarity's sake.
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FTR
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stole this btw KEKW
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FTR
This paragraph has been deleted. - OniBriman1yrCommentedThe other two bandits that were still in the conversation were shocked. To them, it seemed like Zalthu appeared out of nowhere. They stood up and stumped back away from the campfire. The one with the eyepatch drew his bow and readied an arrow. The second bandit pulled one of the two axes of his back and got into a fighting stance. Marius's face turned pale. With the knife to his throat Marius turned his head to see his attacker's face shrouded in darkness. Zalthu's words chilled him to the bone as he said, "You're dead." Zalthu leaned to the right so Marius could see his face. Then he added, "I just killed you."
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Hmm, how do you spell his name? Frey -rah or Freir?
"Argh!!! Who tf is it?" said Freyre annoyingly. - OniBriman1yrCommented
oh, Jezebel is a guy. There I was hoping for a sapphic coupleđ
Looking down at this manic was the magistrate. Their eyes had a disgusted look in them while staring at the traitor who thinks he was some kind of a hero doing such a thing. Not realizing just how foolish his actions were. - OniBriman1yrCommented"Yes! I was the one who did it. I am the one who stole the fourth piece and traded it to the dark race. Now my dear Revna will come back and lead this country back to its former glory which it has lost now because of you incompetent leaders. HAHAHAHAHAHA!" said Jezebel laughing like a maniac
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FTR
In the magistrate court, there was a man on his knees with his hands and legs cuffed and surrounded by other people and guards in the court. - OniBriman1yrCommented
Holeh! My kind of parents
"They sell every sellable organ in your body" - OniBriman1yrCommented
smol orcs
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