Chickenthunder

As I read more of the book I agree with a lot of comments and I ended up dropping it, while I don't agree that an author should just look down on the abilities of certain wizards from the base material, I do enjoy exploring the other nations with magic around the world.

They are capable fighters in there corner of the world. I'm not saying that they are not good or even some of the best, but we are never shown much of other magicals in the books and the movies only show us certain parts of the US magical world. This is a fan fiction and taking certain liberties with it is good, if I wanted to read a book that followed everything from the original then I might as well read the original and not read a fan fiction. I like when the authors change things and try and show us that there is more to the world of Harry Potter then Hogwarts and Britain.

The whole Clear Sky Clan is going to go for it.

Being better now doesn't take away how he was in the past. He may have learned from his mistakes but he still made them, he can't expect everyone to just forget about it and move on.

All chapters are here for me, it sounds like a WN issue, it has happened to me before. Keep up the great work by the way. Love the book.

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So Snape only went and asked for help after he told Voldy about the prophecy and asked him to save Lilly, after he was told that he can't promise anything, THEN and ONLY THEN did he go to Dumbledore and ask him to " Hide her. Hide them all. Keep her-them-safe. Please" He didn't care about Harry or James it was only because he was begging for him to save Lilly that he included them. In return for 'saving' Lilly, Snape became a double agent for Dumbledore.

I didn't think about that honestly, and I get the wanting to keep it to the main pieces.

I like the peerage concept, I'm curious if he will try and get more pieces or just be happy with what he has, maybe pieces that only allow him to travel to worlds and not get new members. Maybe he has to do a mission in that world to get a peerage member from that world. IDK Keep up the great work.

Keep up the great work and don't push yourself to hard, you're writing multiple novels and they are all great.