I love your novel! I hope you can continue updating such promising chapters for your novel! I don't have much to say other than keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more.

Everything just hooks me in! The synopsis and the novel both seem so promising and extremely fun to read. Can't wait for future updates, good job author.

Your book was great although the beginning was cliche I loved how captivating the book was. The plot was captivating and it kept me wanting to read more! Keep updating, I can't wait to read more. -ClumsyPanda

Thank you! Yes it was intentional, I'm glad you liked the book :)

I love how detailed your characters were like when you introduced Jacques as the clueless, forgetful character by including the fact that he didn't know how to work the coffee machine and how he forgot to tell Doxin about the robberies. The plot isn't a cliche horror story. Kudos to the author, keep up the great work!.

I loved the plot of your story! I love how you started the story with the dream. Everything kept me interested and wanting to read more! Kudos to the author! -ClumsyPanda

The book really shows the sad reality of some families and while it's depressing it's part of the factor that makes the plot so interesting. I highly recommend reading it. Good job author!

You're welcome! Can't wait to read more!

This a great systems novel and I highly recommend it. Just reading the book makes you feel like you're in the world. The author has clearly done a lot of research before writing this novel because everything seems like an RPG games. I love the development of the story and the character Kite. I don't typically read system novels but this has really opened up my interests in system novels. Keep up the consistent uploads author! I love it! - ClumsyPanda[img=recommend]

I LOVE THIS. The story line is honestly so interest and the events always keep you on your feet, I highly recommend this book to people who love Romance and Drama! Her brother is literally the sweetest as well as her guy friends. Girl, I see why they jelly :) Keep up the good work author! I'm waiting for the updates! OwO - ClumsyPanda

W-wha? I need more owo

I'm sad. He didn't chase her. :(

OwO Intresting... I LOVE IT

YES DRAMA :)

I am! I love this story. Keep writing! :)

Who is this Carlos? Why is he kidnapping Maria if he cares so much? Ahhh i wanna know more :)

I love it already! The author really shows how powerful of a character she is already!

Maria is a QUEEN.

I highly recommend this! The way the author introduced the plot and main character is compelling. I'm definitely reading future chapters, Rosari and Skye are very interesting characters to take note of as the story progresses.

I like it already! [img=recommend]