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Up until now, it's an adventure with a hint of romance, a complicated one at that! And there are quite a lot of girls, not sure if you can call Harem.

See this! I just gifted the story: Potion

The world is expanding, the writing style is good, I love the relationship between Vivian and Theo that the Author is maintaining, Merida is a really interesting character too. 👍

The contract seems nice, you'll get some exposure to new people now! Keep climbing, you'll face hardships but that is necessary, it'll make you stronger. Oh, great SinnamoN sama, I'm just slow with typing, or I would have come first! Anyways, I knew you'll do it dear, we raised you well![img=recommend]

the storytelling is improved, Do try to add some finer details now dear, An yeah I was hoping you to tell us some of your plans, we might be able to help you out! You have potential dear!

The Writing just got leveled up!

The story is picking up pace now! The writing is good, detailing for the fights is improve! Keep up [img=coins]

56 chapters were worth the wait it seems! Show me some good fight damn it!