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it's a joke. clearly your power of imagination is not high enough.
golden? odd auto correct meant moment
So first the author wrote fighting without a weapon would be impossible but now it's possible because the author wants it to be so whats the point. The Mc said he was waiting for the golden to grab him saying it was moment he was waiting for and so allows himself to be grabbed and almost killed? Was his plan assisted suicide? he only lives because the golem didn't feel like crushing his skull and instead decided pulling on him...??
He's a little toddler In a jail cell in a high security prison built for a powerful Mage. watched over by armored guards separated by metal bars. No way he does anything ever. Also kill a guard? He'd be lucky if he's not punted like a football
The characters are stereotypical the grammar is awful and hard to read the novel has only 20 chapters so far though so I'm unsure if they will improve. because of how awful the English is it makes some scenes just cringey for example the Mc said to taunt someone "deliver my love to your mother he can't help support her child." Then he responded with I am the only sibling in my family you should check to know what to say. ??? this is just bad. because of how many 5 star reviews this has on top of the power chart and how few chapters this has im almost 100% sure this author has some bots to blow up the novel.
If you the author bring something up that is important or delve into a character it's your job to provide an ounce of context but you did not you had the mc go off on his little expedition through the city showcasing his stupidity with his fans who seem to be remembering the mc raping a important character that wasnt explained how he isn't locked up isn't explained. In short for example if a mc of another book starts to somehow start flying you don't explain how he did it 4 chapters in the future. if you bring up a major conflict that is important to the setting and the previous owner body you don't have him go fix the problem then explain the problrm. That and the horrible dialogue is what prompted my review if you don't grasp that that why I said your out fo your mind
This novel is just awful I imagine the other reviews are fake they have to be. The start of the novel is meh is not horrible but all the chapters after is just cringey. Imagine the classic Chinese trope of the young master 3x that plus it's how everyone talks and the mc/author is out of their mind. The mc body old owner did a huge crime. Which wasn't explained why or who or when or anything Just oh this happened. Not even 3 chapters in and there are so many plot holes. Don't read this trust me. common sense is nowhere In this novel.
I don't think I said anything about tenten more of just story plot and stuff? so beyond that I said his sound abilities you gave him should be quite impossible realistically which some readers won't like. It is a fan fiction so you can make his sound do whatever you want. I'm just pointing this out for others.
Concept was good. System wasn't implemented well felt very strange. He somehow knows things he shouldn't like spoilers, if he fuses sound waves into his leg he should be somehow 3-4 times faster? hardly if not no character development whatsoever so far for the mc. The author doesn't care to share his backstory or write action scenes in the exams unless he feels like it. spoilers! Author thinks that Kiba's clan is a noble clan which isn't true so i doubt the authors knowledge of the story. high potential certainly But ruined it very quickly. The author says his sound waves can do things quite impossible like somehow being able to use his sound abilities to turn all energy into sound? I wonder if the reviews actually read the novel not just fan girling over the idea of it which Again is a Interesting concept. Overall not worth reading unless the author edits his novel and fixes it. To author--if you want suggestions The biggest improvement you could make is to stop skipping over your own story like at very beginning where the mc just exists and just oh guess I'm here now and it goes from there not interesting at all. Though if fixed would definitely have a chance to be a solid fan fic. Sorry for long review just felt like sharing my thoughts.
Well played
The story is not bad however the English is difficult to read. I was forced to correct the paragraphs in my head to read it. The system makes no sense as well and could be easily improved for example adding some info dumps explaining it would be a life saver. as the book is now I advise you not to read it until someone edits the book to make it easier to understand.