DaisyDuckNunaStuck
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DaisyDuckNunaStuck1mthPostedFirst of all, the writing quality is epic!!! One of the best written stories here so far... as for the story; the story is intriguing, dark just like the name suggests and the main character is a true and total enigma! like i am surprised at how detailed and deep his engimatic character goes and not just to make him look cool for nothing but he could back it up. Love the deep, dark and uncensored vibes!!
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he's a doche
If they got married his mother would move out and take his sisters with her, except for the one who would cook for him of course. When he put it under consideration, they could all stay, he needed someone to cook and clean for free until he got himself a proper wife. It'd been a year since he'd graduated from university and he missed the freedom of living in Durban. - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrCommented
oh no is he him who did this?
A few days later, Thoko woke to find him sitting at her bedside. The sight of him made her heart skip a beat. His brown hair was disheveled and his tanned arms were on the bed contrasting with the pink duvet they had placed on the bed. - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrCommented
yeah it wont!
He did a pretty good job of trying to kill her she thought to herself. She looked at her reflection hard, with no sympathy. "This will never happen again," she told herself firmly. - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrCommented
aww poor baby!
She took a deep breath and looked at herself in the mirror. He hadn't left her face bare of bruises, this time. He had broken the skin on her right cheek, her lower lip, and her skin was turning a purple-black. - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrReplied to Daoist4rgFWp
thank you soo much for the honest feedback i really appreciate you letting me know ur opinion, as a writer i really need to know. as for the slow i was also feeling the same, but then i think time n build up is also necessary for the characters to grow and for the future events to makes sense so i hope i will be able to keep u guys entertained during this journey that moon n ford are on :) and ur very welcome! i love to give u guys daily chaps even if it means i do nothing else but write all day long hehehe
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dont ask me i dont know where this guy came from lol
Why am I the one given this much power and intellect, when all they have is the fear of being powerless, running around like headless chickens in the face of unknown; if they aren't only meant to be ruled over? - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrReplied to _Riu_
yeah plot armor
Why am I the one alive among the thousands who die, everyday. - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrReplied to _Riu_
hahahaha he's already egotistical ur only feeding him more
What am I here for? - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrReplied to _Riu_
lol
Why am I here? - DaisyDuckNunaStuck2yrReplied to _Riu_Ch 2 His Creed