nice story....don't drop... you could also improve the grammar

would have been a nice read buh he joined the X-Men .....🥲bye bye 🤝

except for the slow update, i Iove the story......👍💯

just started reading.... enjoying it already pls do not drop🙏🌚

overall it's good.....the grammar could be improved tho ......good work 😉

nice work pls don't drop👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍....and more updates pls

haven't started reading buh.....I am just happy to see that it isn't harem.....Good luck .....and I hope u don't drop it

I am glad u continued.....pls don't drop

just for how good the writing itself is.....with hardly any grammatical error👍.....and the update pace💯👍......and please don't drop it

started reading it and it has been great..... although you improved on the conversation aspect compared to your other works......you could do more.....👍😸 good work

I hope you make this fic chapters longer and don't flop it.... anyway goof work👍💯

nice story and idea....pls just make the reading more enjoyable by correcting misspellings....and longer chapters 👍😊

nice story and concept .....I just wish u make the chapters longer and pls don't drop.....keep up the good work 👍😊

nice novel ......pls don't drop💯💯💯💯💯💯nnnnnbbbbbbbbbbvvvvv

I love the novel....pls don't drop.. 💯💯💯💯

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Nice read