Daichii_Kurosaki
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I think he had it all at 15 after Janet...
yeah this mf dragon is getting old... again this story should focus on the relationship of the prota and his mothers as the title suggests.. it wouldnt surprise me if in the next chapters it will jump tothe clones again doing something on their own... but alas we are invested already... let us see how it turns out. Thanks for the chapter!
I just find it funny you know.. that the protagonist appears less each time. Even the title of the work suggests that the story is about.. well "the son of such and such", not "the story of such family" or "the story of certain world"... anyway just ranting, thanks for the chapter!
Not only shorter but redundant too... like for exemple... "he looked at her, she looked at him. they looked at each other, suddenly they realized they were domingo the same thing... looking at one another..." too much dude, next time it is going to be like the show "24" you are going to detail the seconds passing... [img=Unalived]