st0rm6

NeiR

I really enjoyed the story up to about chapter 200 and stuck around up to 300 hoping for it to get better, seems like the author revised the beginning and made it better and then gave up. after about chapter 200 characters disappeared, the writing went downhill, the kids are suddenly going to kindergarten and talking at less than a year old and the MC and his wife completely changed. timeline makes no sense and the plot is incomprehensible

yeah it feels like the author revised the first part of the story at some point or something and didn't fix the continuity. kids are talking, they're scared about the kindergarten that they don't go to, grandparents don't live with them, missing security team, missing nannies

doesn't this guy own a private military company? how the hell are gangsters stealing his kids?

ming flor?